Really good work bhanu. Like Daniel said, clear up your value structure some. Something that helps with this it to map out values. This often leads to better structure. Try it out as practice, even if you are not intent on adopting it permanently. The panel's comps are looking good, but if you put that extra bit into them they'll be great. Also think of the Page's composition as a whole.
Bhanu, really enjoying your comic pages. As mentioned by Brendan, it would be better to organize the way you shade your work and control your lines, it would definitely add alot to your work. Post #130 is a decently organized page. Keep it up mate.
i like the last comic page, it seems to me the more accurate in composition and narration, i like the others too, but the square into square and the irregular composition of panels is always hard to do, i don't now...
i like the loose trace you have, especially in the last panel (the masked guy)
of the 128 post, very interesant...
Oh man, it has been so long since I was inhere! Im sorry dude, I guess its my bussy-some period that has kept me... Once the damn comic is done I shall come more often.
Over to the important stuff. IMO you have done very well, Im proud of you! The horror comic is lookin really good, especially fancy the gasmasked dude, very cool character indeed! Gonna be fun following this. The pose and anatomy in the full page is lookin very cool. Its all good. Rock on my fellow comic... er...!
hey guys ,
I am feeling tired right now. Its a hell trying to scan the pics. after hours of pointless hard work , two bad scans.
Oh and replies
Brenny my boy- I will ry my best to put good values amd morals in the little pages butits kinda hard to do when the page itself is nobigger than a4 still I am gonna try it with tht enext page.
Sirio_brazzi-Thanks for the crit man. really appreciate it.
Dimagyan- thanks man glad you ike te comic and evn I like the gasmasked guy. dont we all.
Orifice-hello my swedish comic artist friend.its okay , being busy is good. being lazy is bad. and hey man keep pushing that work of yours too. Waiting for more of your comic work too.
dairain aventure guy the comic is goona be out soon , oooh I am so exited.
hte first pic is dairain guy and popbot.
the next is a experiment gone horribly wrong. Sham entices pig jaw( my original character).
Crits are more than welcome
Dude, I have a suggestion, try to get some white pastel pencil. Then use some pretty thin watercolours to tint your page, and draw over that with graphite (or charcoal or even sienna) and use the pastel pencil to give some highlights.
Try it if you want to, you could even add ink at some stage. You're making progress, keep it up!
ThaNks for dropping guys,
Brendon-Umm , thanks for the suggestion. SOunds fun. Lemme try it .
Mull77- thanks for the comment on the comic , I will try to push myself as much as I can.thansk for dropping by.so a zombie update, its just a fucking teaser for another zombie painting I am doing . Its gonna be nasfuckinty. and second another pigjaw wip.Inked by markers will try to paint it hmm. kets see.
I am back.....for a while.
longxiange man ........woah thats just a great complimente but really teh best guys here with watercolor are amish commy, dutton. Check out there sbs and i am sue you will be doing double back flips in no time hehe?
Ok so I am here o do two things .an update and an annoucement.
SO what should I do first update or announcement , announcement or update.
So first the update
SO to get better linework I am trying my hands at marker and using a blue highlighter to mek ti more fun the first sketch mayeb took 5 mins
and now the badly done sps but they were fun I guess the first one is called gothsp , hehe,the angles and anatomy is fucked .the second sp is mehulk portrait aaaaah. each sp took about 20 mins. sould start putting more time into these.and now the announcement
tadaa............................................. .........................here it is ...............
are you ready?
I am gonna buy a digi cam .............lame huh? but I am so fucking giddy right now. cant wait to take pics of my drawings and get rid of this fucked up scanner.
have fun mothafuckas.
Hey bhanu - three cheers for photographing drawings!
These look really good, like the hulk sp especially, and your linework is really improving.
The first figure seems a bit stiff, relax the shoulders some more and exaggerate the contrapasto some more. Looks good overall!