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    I'm a maniac thats for sure

    here we go
    at the suggestion of a friend i decided to post up here a little bit
    so ill start with my most recent piece i learned a good deal from this one.

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    As a mans power and knowledge grows so the paths he may choose lessen more and more until he can choose only and whole what he must do.
    time to follow the trend: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...14#post1052814
    oh and heres a college buddy of mine:
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    MWahahaa, hahaha, ahahahaaaaa.

    You're finally posting here.

    Good, good.

    You know what I think of this already, so I won't repeat myself.

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    Cool a fresh and new SB. how come you never started any before?
    I quite like the blueish shadows. The guy in the dooropening falls a bit to the side. The column in next to him feels a bit ackward. Im totally not into drawing like this so its hard to comment.

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    I love the coloring, though the fire needs a little work. Fire only rises in a pinacle point on candles (because of the fuel being a single wick), in a oil can fire it would have multiple tongues.

    But great job! ^.^

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    Interesting. Keep on.

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    Don't miss the rise

    This is actually Wolverine's sketchbook
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    thanks for all the comments guys, i appreciate it, sorry i don't update this thing very often.
    anyhow....heres a lil doodle i was doin since i have no one to tutor

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    time to follow the trend: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...14#post1052814
    oh and heres a college buddy of mine:
    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=75358
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    Nice sketch, ya' ass!

    I think a bit of line work to help show focus would be nice. The edges are alright, but it's a little plain. I think some linework would help show some wrinkles in the fabric and the thickness of the dark parts of the costume (mantle and waist thingy).

    A better shine on the glass, too. Also, some shine on the gray things on the mantle and waist thingy, they look like they are metal of some kind, like tin or aluminum, like a crazy costume from old scifi. You know I love that kind of crap, like old Doctor Who.

    Therefore, all-in-all it's a great costume, it just needs a little more work.

    Oh, avoid the urine yellow background next time though.

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    heres a webpage comp

    heres a webpage comp to replace my crappy old site design.

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    time to follow the trend: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...14#post1052814
    oh and heres a college buddy of mine:
    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=75358
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    hey this is a work in progress, anywho I'm not sure if I need soemthing on the left side or not so I put a merchant tent there, not sure if it works or not.

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    time to follow the trend: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...14#post1052814
    oh and heres a college buddy of mine:
    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=75358
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    I think the merchant table is fine where you had it. You could try different angles though. I would definitely keep it, or something else, there. Otherwise its a fairly large hole in the picture plane.

    I would make the ground more discernible from the boxes on the right side of the picture. I mean, unless there is a sudden drop off and these box huts are really box sky scrapers.

    All-in-all, looks good so far.

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    well here is where i meant to post this, accidentally posted it in an old sketch thread.
    anywho he is a "homeless" guy from the world i was workin on

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    time to follow the trend: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...14#post1052814
    oh and heres a college buddy of mine:
    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=75358
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    I'm in ur sketchbook.
    Bumpin' ur thread.

    Grimier hands would help him (like you said). Plus posting his personality traits would help to understand the character. I remember you mentioned him as the guy that finds the good stuff, like a pirate of junk. So, a long jacket with large cuffs, like the stereotypical pirate, but make it heavily worn, dirty, torn, junky, and so on. The scarf is a nice touch though.

    I'll say more, if/once you post some of his traits.

    Keep it up!

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