This is a personal project I am working on (not that I have any commissioned ones). This is an idea that I have been tossing around for a while and when I came across a sweet underpainting tutorial, I decided to give it a go. The idea is a literal satire on the modern battlefield that we currently wage our wars on; the office. To start I have worked on developing a character with the right position and camera angle as you see below. Being that I am the only artist that I personally know, it is difficult to get any constructive feedback other than the usuall pat on the rear from the family, so I am fishing for some good solid crits. Please let me know you thoughts as I stumble through this one.
Below is the first phase where I am underpainting the values and giving the character some definition.
It looks like you have made a disign around the head and hands. With that said Your torso is out of porportion with where your shoulder should be in terms with your neck and arm placements. The more detail you apply will fix the the weird look of the legs. The porportioning look correct as far as I can see. Hope this helps.
Thanks for the feedback, Malign. Hopefully some of the misporportions will work out as I add more depth to the image. I'm looking for a good ref for the pants and shoes. I may have to subject myself as a model to get the right angles.
A couple more hours of work: