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    Icon Wip - Spawn

    I love Spawn!
    In the malebolgia's Kingdom...

    pls crit!

    Last edited by Brunob; April 24th, 2007 at 06:31 PM.
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    Spawn! Wow, talk about going back in the day.

    I love this so far. The only complaint I might be able to pick out, but I can't even really say is valid, is I think possibly the right leg and left arm might be a tad (ever so slightly) small.

    I would add more detail to his surroundings, just to give the picture more life to it.

    I'm curious, where has his feet gone?

    Other then that, I really love this! Great job!

    Poof!
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    Hey! Wow it looks great I like it!
    Gomp has a good point there, what happend to his feet?
    Love the contrast in the colours.
    GO GO Spawn!

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    Looks alright...anatomy is a little wonky, but it'll work.
    ... except for his feet.

    If there was some sort of reason why they're gone, that would be one thing- but this looks like you just wanted to avoid drawing them. Try and resolve them some other way.

    Good job, though. Keep Creating!

    -Andrew

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    thanks all for crits.

    his feet is mescled with the floor! hehehhe

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    (my left) arm is bent wrong, the wrist/elbow do not look right.. as if the bone is twisting, and not bending. Changing the position of the hand to rest forward on his thigh, instead of to the side would help a lot imo.
    the coloring this far though is very nice. very comicish, yet very realistic. sort of like the stuff boris and julie painted for marvel. nice work.

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    what is it "boris and julie" serena? links?

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    I understand that we're eye level with his ass, but you have to do a lot more to make his right (our left) leg come forward. right now it looks horribly deformed and stubby at the thigh.

    My suggestion: widen his overall thigh, darken his crotch and lighten his knee with some of that orange light. You need to really make that thing come forward or else it won't be foreshortening, it'll just be akward

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    good but

    hi Brunob

    Your image looks good. I like colors. I love Spawns chear or what is it, realy realy cool. But Spawn anatomy kill your image ((. For me nothing is on the right place. look his right elastic man hend(( his left leg is longer then right leg. ((((( and head, try to do samething with your head.((
    Sketch more anatomy
    But love chear man, bravo.
    bye

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    Boris Vallejo (did a lot of conan fantasy artwork) and Julie Bell (Boris's wife) artists of modern day that get paid a great amount for their work. (Not unlike Luis Royo, or Keith Parkinson.)

    Their actual site is...
    http://www.imaginistix.com/


    They are one of my biggest influences, I am absolutely infatuated with their work. For lack of better way to describe my interest in what they do. (Just sometimes their women are a little to "husky" for my tastes, but it's the style.)

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