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    crit my chick

    Just wanted to throw this down in the wip section to get some advice.

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    Anatomy is off, the handle of her weapony thingy is stabbing her in the hand, the hairdo makes her look like an old man, her left foot is a war wound? Her boobs look like pancakes, her left arm looks like it's rotated backwards too far (in addition to being scewered on her weapony thingy), and her apparent styles clash horribly, and her arms are too short (I think). Also need to study drapery to figure out how her clothes should be folding, and hanging from her body. Good luck.


    P.S. She also looks very flat in many places.

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    Looks wierd, i agree with Sepulverture

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    looks to me like someone scribbled all over this chick with a fistful of charcoal and went after her with electric razors haha.

    that aside, i would suggest getting some serious reference. i now sacrifice myself on the alter of dignity to show what i mean. i only had my webcam on hand to demonstrate. i dont expect you to use these specific images, in fact i would encourage you to find a female friend to pose like this with a broomstick or something similar. i want you to pay particular attention to the grip of the left hand, and how the thumb overlaps the fingers.

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    yeah what they said... specifically fix the bones of the neck, the legs, the arms... in these areas it's as if she has no bones at all. Definitely get a real ref as mentioned right above me, the above ref would be great for the hands.. but anatomy for women is a suggested study before you really get into this again.

    However.. the good points are the coloring idea is really interesting. Especially where the face/hair are concerned. When you redo this I suggest keeping that general idea, it works very well with the punk rockishness of this character persona. But definitely work on the anatomy.Great concept though!

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    wow! that's a lot of trouble you went to there, stoph!
    Money: I think paining over white with transparent brushes isnt a good idea...block in the colours with an opaque brush, then go for the more transparent ones!

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    I dont think this guy is coming back.

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