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    Painting in Photoshop

    HI everybody

    This is my first painting draw all in the photoshop.
    How do you like it?
    THNX for all comments.

    MY SKETCHBOOK

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    To be completely honest with you.....I'm having trouble figuring out which end or side is the front and which end is the back. The lights/gun flames? make it look like the side is the front....?But the propeller on the nose?? makes it look like the right side is the front?? Im confused.

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    I agree, it's hard to tell which direction this thing is flying. This could benefit from some solid black line art over top of it, as it's currently painted with more of an organic painting style. Also, unless you purposefully want these to be flying in a set formation, I would recomend moving the smallest "plane" to in between the two other "planes" just to make it more visually interesting.

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    looks pretty good. Its fairly blurry and hard to see the actual design. Leaving the propellar like things blurry is alright but you want to sharpen up the actual body.
    peace,

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    especially the left wings on these aircrafts looks strange. Its direction and shape is hard to tell.

    otherwise it looks more finished than my speedpaints.

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    The design reminds me of some images by scott robertson on this page and this page (actually most of the pages) of the propeller threat on the sijun forums.

    Like it though.

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    Thnx

    hi everybody

    My painting havent good perspective and have meny deformation I know. But it was first speed exercise and I would try do something quickly and dont spend time with details. You can see it in small zoom of propeller.
    I did sketch in photoshop too and I started just draw something (waw it can be helicopter= no concept)) I just sketched some forms and tested some brushes, layers.... Thats why my forms and concept is not the best.
    For lights/gun flames is realy speed (( But for direction for my is clear you can see small lights behind 2 propellers.
    I very like speed painting.
    Thnx for comments.
    Look my sketchbook plz ---Cucak SketchBOOK--- I prepare some concepts but just the best one I will do in color. Help me choose one.
    bye

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    I really like the design, but the background is hurting it a little...it's just too difficult to make out many of the details. I can't tell if the patch of light is a river or a break in the clouds.

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    I agree about the background - try to make the values of each plane in space feel seperated more. Maybe make those clouds streak somewhat in the same direcion as the arrows you show here. - add more dynamics that way and direction.

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    Seems to be a little to much "smoke and mirrors" IMO. Some cool effects and blurs but its tough to understand the main form and whats important. I would just detail the "focal areas" a lot more. Would help the viewer understand what you want to communicate. And on the back ground the issue may be that it's too consistent all the way across. It has equal amounts of contrast and value all the way across making it feel bumpy but flat. These adjustments do not take a lot of time.

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    Thnx guys for all comments. I started MY SKETCHBOOK with more concepts And later I will colorate one witch people like more.
    Thnx

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    Ok, I'm having no problem following the design of the aircraft and how it works, I'm just waiting to see the added detail. You've definitely caught my attention with this one and it would look so much better with more detail and maybe a small view of the battlefield below.

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    right now it seems that everything is being overwhelm by the blur effect and overlay that you used. I can catch a glimps of the orientation of the craft but i think that if you define your edge a bit more and pay a bit more attention to the detail that make the craft will help bring out the form a bit better....also pay atttention to the form and shadow...theres something wonky going on the wings and also where the wings meet the fuselage.

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    Emotional picture :-)

    Here is one of my speed sketch and I colored it in PS. I tried to create emotional picture with small spaceshipdriver who sit in the front and thinking.

    ---- MY SKETCHBOOK ---- Thnx for all comments

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    here are some corections or not? I put this paceship to the space.

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