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    Icon A Ninja's Thirst

    We Have a Scifi Ninja Closing in on his Enemy "Government Soldier" The secrete operative Ninja has a thurst for killing vengefully as he decends from above to kill is prey.


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    I built this object in Maya, MY FIRST MAYA OBJECT

    Its the Moa, Scifi Police Vehicle.
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    The soldiers head is way too small, as are the ninjas hands/arms. The flat perspective of the panel behind him is out of wack with the perspective of the rest of the scene, and the fact that it's so sharply rendered while everything else is, frankly, pretty unfinished, draws attention to it.

    There's a big different between loose and sketchy. The main difference being you look at a loose painting and are shocked when you examine it closely and realize there are just a bunch of squiggly lines where you saw a highlight or texture, whereas with a sketchy painting you notice the lines right away, and they look like scribbly lines. Your painting is sketchy.

    Your humvee police thing is ok, but again...not finished. At least, not finished enough on its own to warrant a thread here. It could be forgiven as part of a larger body of finished work, or if it were textured, but as it stands, I'm not feeling it. If nothing else, the presentation of the model says WIP and not finished product.
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    Smile

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    i dunno how to texture.. i just learned how to build in maya within an hour and then i just started to build this. Yes my work is sketchy. Ill make sure to chop off my hands so i wont paint again to satisfy EVERYONE THAT FUCKING HATES MY ARTWORK HERE. YOUR ALL ACTING LIEK A BUNCH OF DINKS.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Artbyryan
    i dunno how to texture.. i just learned how to build in maya within an hour and then i just started to build this. Yes my work is sketchy. Ill make sure to chop off my hands so i wont paint again to satisfy EVERYONE THAT FUCKING HATES MY ARTWORK HERE. YOUR ALL ACTING LIEK A BUNCH OF DINKS.
    ElDavismo?

    How about instead of cursing at people who're giving you constructive crits, you actually go take that time to actually try improving.
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    StalkerZero wasn't!

    Browse a little and you'll find that people are not dinks to everyone and most give their crits to be helpful. Most post pics because they want crits. If you only want admiration you should state so. Then ppl will really hate your posts! -that's me being a dink again.
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    Giving you solid, helpful advice is far from being a dink.
    Last edited by Interceptor; September 20th, 2006 at 05:46 PM.
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    I can already see where this is going. Ha Ha


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    Interceptor you Rank number 1 as far as being a dink.

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    A Ninja's Thirst

    more artwork for you to bitch about.

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    'Bitch bitch bitch!'

    Uncrank your attitude from the 11 dial.

    You've been given valid criticism and yet you act with the mental acumen of a squished racoon.

    Now either you can continue this way and get banned really fast or you can change your ways and stop being a nuisance.
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    Didn't you steal some work from people and post it?
    I thought he was banned too...


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    Oh yeah, I thought this guy got banned...
    No pain, no gain.

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    What's with all of these irate Canadians lately?

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    This stuff sucks dink.
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    Quote Originally Posted by James Kei
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