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September 20th, 2006 #1
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September 22nd, 2006 #3
September 22nd, 2006 #4
You've got a lot of stuff in here suprised no one has posted yet. Lot here to comment on but I'll give you a crit on your first one, now I'm not absolutley sure about this but his jaw seems to angle downwards too much, when you open your mouth to that extent the jaw lowers and angles downwards at the same time rather than just pointing down, try this in the mirror I'm too lazy to walk 10 ft at the moment . I like the style you have on your pencils though.
Keep posting more!
September 23rd, 2006 #5
great colors dude!
good luck on your new SB
September 24th, 2006 #6
So Ive started colouring the alien robot doodle and Im pleased with how its coming along, but any advice is always welcome!
This guy on the other hand is giving me some problems so any help would be very much apreciated! Ive corrected (or at least I think I have) his chest, brought his head forward a bit and re designed his shoes so tha they conform quite closely to the shape of his feet. Overall I think the image needs to be a bit darker and more sinister. I like the character but I think the image could be alot stronger - Im thinking of starting from scratch...Ill sleep on it and see tomorro.
September 28th, 2006 #7
i like your pencil stuff - the female orc and the werewolf really stand out to me, they have a good beleivable feel to them.
the last character i agree could be stronger, i'm only going on my initial impressions here but his pose seems a bit weak, like he's slightly off balance...i'm not sure if it's the floor throwing him out though, i would suggest maybe reworking the pose a little to add some tension, and upping the play of the firelight on him, throwing in some heavier shadows to add that sinister feel you get when you see someones face lit up by the glow of a fire...
keep at it, be interesting to see how this progresses if you decide to rework it.
October 4th, 2006 #8
October 4th, 2006 #9
Hey Trevor, havent talked to you in ages, hows things. some good stuff in here, id throw some more darks into that study though, just give it more of a contrast.
November 13th, 2006 #10
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