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Thread: Travel girl
September 13th, 2006 #1
She gets never lost...
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Really cute. Who would'nt want to pick up such an adorable hitchhiker?
2 things. in the background, the black outline in the dirttrail is a bit too harsh. I think you could do without it. And for a young girl her breasts may be just a little bit too low. But those are entirely nitpicky. I think it's a great image. Simple and cute.
/edit: I checked out your website. Some nice stuf there, too. Especially the guy and girl walking into the classroom
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September 13th, 2006 #3
September 14th, 2006 #4
hey dude... good job!!
the athmosphere is nearly perfect for comic style but the background seems to be very near... if there were a blue fog over the mountains it might looks more like a background...
her pants .... i don´t like the shading, its not very authentic ... doesn´t look like folds more than paper or smth.
ok and the main point... the cars drive from right to left (right?).
wouldn´t it better if her hair waves to the left?
ok this is my crit 4 today... nice pic i like it!