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    The Underground City

    Hello all!

    Here is my latest work done in Photoshop CS. The story behind the image is the discovery of a large ruined city of a long lost civilization.
    Any crits are welcome. I hope you like it and thanks for your time!

    Cya around

    The Underground City

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    I get the feeling this scenario is going to turn into a porn. I like the environment, but the characters seem a little odd. The one girl has anti-gravity boobs. The guy, besides his sneer, seems fairly uninteresting. And the other girl looks like she's about to go Street Fighter on someone's ass. It would be nice if there was some way to recognize her as the statue without refering to her clothes.

    This seems like it is part of a very interesting story... care to share?

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    mmh ... a bit of too much "big Boobs"...

    I didnt read the statue as a statue 'til I read anticonnors post ... I just thought it was some huge superherowoman in the BG. Make the boobs on the main character more realistic (not playboy-realistic though ) and the setting will feel more beliavable.

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    A lot of work, but serious lack of lighting, coloring and sense. Excuse me, but did you ever have seen statue on the backyard without of pedestal, in the strange meaningless pose? I suggest you to read some architecture manuals.

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    What are you guys talking about..His stuff is right on. Nothing wrong with huge hooters...lol

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    I know it's probably not the type of crit you're looking for, but compositionally, the fact that they're all walking/facing off to the right really bugs me. I think it's because they're all in a line like that that really does it. I think if you put the two figures in the background on the right and the main figure on the left, perhaps looking back over her shoulder slightly more would maybe help contain the viewer in the picture and bring a little balance to the foreground. Although I think the background would still be a little out of wack with the rest of the picture in that scenario. Just my personal opinion on it.

    I agree a little with anticonner about the outfits. I think that could easily be fixed by changing the males outfit...give him an outfit similar to the girl he's helping out to tie them together, although maybe it makes sense in the broader context of the story you're trying to tell. As an image though, the 3 seperate outfits, with one being so outlandish, doesn't really seem to work. Also, tomb raider girl needs a bra, stat!

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    I get the feeling this scenario is going to turn into a porn. I like the environment, but the characters seem a little odd. The one girl has anti-gravity boobs. The guy, besides his sneer, seems fairly uninteresting. And the other girl looks like she's about to go Street Fighter on someone's ass. It would be nice if there was some way to recognize her as the statue without refering to her clothes.
    What he said lol.

    That's exactly what weant through my mind. The enviro is definitly the best part of your pic.

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