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    break up

    break up

    break up

    break up

    break up

    break up

    it's been raining a lt here in NY
    thanks for looking

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    i like this alot... the story gets intense with the rain but your represenation of raindrops throws me off a little. at first i thought they were covered in oatmeal...or something worse was dripping from her face...i think the areas where it is actually dripping off make it look like they are melting, possibly just a few drops here and there. or just continue the drops coming from the sky to signify that it is raining... good job though, i want to know more.. is he gay and trying to hide it? hah just kidding

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    thanks for the critiques!
    and no, he's not.

    more of the story here cataclysm-saga.com

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