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    Monk

    hello all
    please do what the thread wants you to do

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    Monk
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    Quote Originally Posted by VoodooPimp
    hello all
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    Ummm................eat cookies?

    Are you going to add some more color to it, because at this point it looks really washed out. Is he wearing mittens? DOes he have a goiter? Is that white stuff whipping around, his hair? Are those tattoo's or some kind of plant vine?

    In other words, you seem to have alot of strange things going on with his anotomy, and the lines need to be varied weights to begin to define the forms of whatever is going on in this peice. Keep working on it though!
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    eemmmm......writing crits
    thanks, i will try to work it out

    mittens: yes
    goiter: its more a kind of acessoir than body
    hair: yes
    wich anatomythings do you mean exectly??
    off corse its no realistic human its more comicstyle,
    so are there stylefaults in anatomy?

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    I am not sure how well my markings will show up, and I hope you dont mind, I was just wanting to show what jumped out at me on this. I also added some idea's for definition lines in the hair to help show that it is hair, and to lead the eye around the figure.
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    sorry overwrite last pic.. its the new now
    funny all parts i like u crit
    yeahh will draw a nother arm
    but thanks for advices, will try to do a second...

    take a look at these plz:
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    Hmmm..........the colored one makes alot, ALOT more sense. Still get rid of that one line in his neck though, it makes him look like he has a goiter.
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