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August 24th, 2006 #1
Flooded valley - Edit, scroll down
hmm another enironment, hope u like it
i tried allot of stuff with the colors on this one.. and i think this looked the best so hope u like it
Last edited by Joey-b; August 24th, 2006 at 02:40 PM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberAugust 24th, 2006 #2
I dont know if its the case,but the water looks like ice to me..I like the sky and the colors...I think the bird might be a little too big(perspective issue)
I think you could make it better with a little more work
August 24th, 2006 #3
I think Im gonna make a short key for this question cause Ive asked it like a dozen times for crit week and it seems to be the culprit in many of these pieces -
Is that color dodge?
I know what you're saying about the color, but its all contaminated because of your white. You have color but you have even more white and its killing your piece.
The values - again a victim of the god light - need to be arranged better- its almost as light in the Fg as the BG
The composition isnt that interesting - two similar shapes, sizes and values on both sides.
That house...does it have flood insurance cause its on its way down...
shadows are going black - which makes things flat and dead
Overall, stay away from blacks, whites and color dodge...
August 24th, 2006 #4
Eraser - thx ill try to get some waves in there and yeah the bird.. arck that lookes awfull
Rascar Capac -- no not the color dodge, but yeah ur right to much white, as for the composition hmm yeah i could make it a bit more interesting with some nice highlights/shadows maybe .. ill c what i can do , thx!
but first im gonna play oblivion on my (just had to use this once
August 24th, 2006 #5
I took all the crits and came up with this