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    Female concept W.I.P (Nude)

    Hey everybody! I've decided i should take a break and come back with a fresh mind. please say anything you want i would like to take advantage of this forum =)

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    the anatomy does look better, but still too smooth in many places and her left knee is still lower than where it should be, making her upper leg look very long. there's also not much arc to her back, which is possible in reality, but it makes her hips look too high and lose definition in this image.

    also, her neck looks as if its positioned a bit too far toward her left shoulder, not centered between them. the face and hair look pretty good. overall, just some details to work on but otherwise its not a bad place to start. - JAG
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    thanks jag your comments are always appeciated =) i think this would be a great way for me to get back into the momentum
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    Revise

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    The body seems better, but the knees are still too low and to small, especially on HER left leg (our right). Maybe it's me, but her head seems really small in the last picture and her neck too thin. I like what you're doing with that hand a lot. Keep posting.
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    oh oops>< i missread jag's comment and purposely lowered the right knee =X thanks for the clearing that up for me cookiedough
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    heres a quick paint over..

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    just to show you how close you are.. just a few details to clean up. - JAG
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    Nice line in jag - that looks a lot better.

    As for the work - amazing gray scale work. I really like the face and where you're going with her hair and hand... it makes movement in the image. The breasts seem to need some smoothing for the shading though, right now it seems forced. I have no crits aside from those. Love this concept so far, keep posting.
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    slow and steady she goes...I've been spending a lot of time on this but the changes are subtle...since this is my first real attempt at trying to finish a piece in photoshop i guess i'm taking it real real slow

    Thanks for your responses, its making me work THAT much harder in trying to improve and finish this piece...i hope to see further responses =)

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    >< errr another update...be harsh =D


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    the neck and body proportions look much better.. but her left upper arm is a bit short. i noticed its that way in my line drawing as well.. sorry about that. usually the elbows line up with the bottom of the rib cage.. it doesnt seem to have the proper length at the moment.

    also, where her thigh meets her crotch.. whatever that lighter smudge is really breaks the flow of her leg. tuck that back just a bit.

    at her right side of her stomach.. it curves out too much. follow the line starting from underneath her breast. her ribs curve convexly [inward toward her stomach]. at the end of her ribs, the curve should change to a concave curve [outward toward her arm] all the way down to the top of her hips. almost like a very long skinny S-curve:
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    as you have it, it appears to be to convex curves joined at an end:

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    from the bottom of her breast to the bottom of her ribs; then from the bottom of her ribs all the way to the top of her right knee.. see it? try to change that to show more curvature of her body. nice work - JAG
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    heres an update, i can feel it i'm almost done ><... i really would like to finish this before thursday...please be harsh =)

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    her left breast.. the lighting doesnt seem correct. try using a ref for that. - JAG
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