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    My pirate proyect

    .Hi guys , i need a little help from my friends ( is it a song).
    .This is a proyect about pirates that im doing , itīs unfinished yet , but i want to know your coments..thanks!



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    Hey P. Falken!
    I think that the pistol he's holding in his left hand is drawn in an awkward position, it looks more like a weird blowtorch than a gun at the moment
    Try to fix that up.
    His left forearm is a bit too thick compared to the rest of the body.
    Also, I'm missing his right hand, but since it's a WIP, I guess you haven't come that far yet

    Keep it up!

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    nice concept.. this needs more excitement. its a pretty dire situation but it sure doesnt feel threatening. i really like the way the skelleton that just got blown away looks like its coming out of thin air. keep workin on it - JAG

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    very nice. the lighting makes quite an improvement. i know you're still developing this but i'll say it now: it looks too 'soft' get some texture and aggresive lites n shadows in there - JAG

    it's only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything..
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