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    Cyren Song - Frozen Lilacs

    Cyren Song - an image done of my character Cy for my new website layout.

    http://www.frozenlilacs.com

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    The details and the cotume overall are not bad.
    The pose though is completely unbalanced, also the proportions and anatomy is somewhat weird.
    One other thing to look for is the hypersaturation of the colors, makes it hard to read what's happening in the picture.
    Not a fan of the style but tis decent.

    And I agree with Blue exceedingly mono-tonal, not enough variation in the palette.

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    hey nice manga style going on here, your painting is good in terms of the style you're following. The composition is very wallpaper style, but I guess thats what you're going for. One Critique for the eyes, You have chosen to make them very big , but theres something about them which seems to be ignoring the form of face in general. They dont wrap arround the head so well, if you know what I mean.

    Anyway, nice. will check out your site now

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    NICE! But please...bigger boobs! xD

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    far too mono-tonal. but nice otherwise...i dispise the anime aspect though

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    It looks alright... The rendering on the body looks a bit too "Simple" and geometric. Aside from the other things mentioned, those black lines are totally killing it for me. IMO, if you render it this well, you should not include those lines.

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    the rendering is really great on this, i would maybe tone down the background to help pop the character more, but other than that, real impressive work

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    Is a nice image, nice colors and design...I like it


    But her eyes are making her look strange and unhuman in a bad way. I´m not talking about the size, I´m talking about the double circle iris and the camera flash intent by putting a dark-unsaturated color instead of pure black.


    Is something that I get when I look at both your characters you posted, love everything, but I don´t like to look the eyes, they seem a little dead in a way .

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    Mm, nice - not exactly my "taste" but I really appreciate the simplistic (not the right word for it, but I think you know what I mean...) rendering. Good colors, cyan is a tricky color... I don't know - seems cyan only "exists", or rather when cyan exists like that - that everything should take on a bit of cyan as well... hmm, dunno, cyan is tricky.

    I guess what I'm trying to say is the cyan bugs me a bit I think it works fine as her hair and in her costume but it's too powerful as the background perhaps?

    Anyways, yeah I'd like to see more

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kalango
    NICE! But please...bigger boobs! xD
    I do agree. Breast that size shouldn't have shapes that defined. I'm not asking for water melons but at least a C cup. I love the colors, though.

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    I'd like to see a paler skin colour myself. Looks like she just got out of a very hot bath. But I like it!

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    This one is much more pleasant to look at than the one with pink background. Nice clouds.

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    It's a very nice piece IMO. I love the clouds and the way you treated her skin. Good lighting too! But I'm not too fond of neighter the style nor the cyan. My taste^^.

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