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  • Go with the ol' father-son thingy man, or else your an idiot.

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    oooh thats looking utterly brilliant! i love the subtle silhouette in the b/g...fantastic. and plus- that first panel on the last one is just sublime.
    4 stars can go suck a cock and die, voted 5

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    Haha thanks very very much my good sir! N yes, I do agree, that the first one worked out nicely, now I just gotta get them 2 others floatin! Damneth!
    hihihihah oh man you didn't have to do that! Thanks thousands though!

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    Thanks muchly my man!

    A lil' sumthin. I used ref for once.


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    the page looks smokin hot brother. especially the first panel , but watch out the shadows the street looks uphill because of them. the texture odn houses looks neat. All hail ash wood. hehe. but I a not getting the feel of a sequence in the second and third panel. maybe an additional inset panel or somethign might help. Definitely 5 stars stuff.

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    I like another comics page.
    In your last work - this portrait it's to much dirty colors ... and nose is in diferent direction than eyes ...

    cheers

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    WOooo! THese last posts are kicking some ass. Cant wait for more.

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    I have serious problems regarding this comic thing. I am real tired of the story I have right now and have a new one. So I dont know which one to choose.

    In the first one the main character meets up with his dad and the comic has about 5 pages in blue-ish b/w and a more light-effect-y style. In these pages The character gets alot of story to what has happened and who he is. His dad is someahat of a crook he finds out. N then the comic has a so n so ending, which I could change. Wont tell the end!

    The new idea is that ya follow 2 people. Both of them are extremely lonersome and has never met another human being. So these two meet by sercomstance, and together they can overwin their problems. Another thing could be that they battle eachother and the reader get to roote for one of them. Cuz they are kind of opposites. Hector is a city man and is kinda reprecenting fire. The otherone lives out on a big sandy wasteland, has white hair and dark clothes. He is representative of wind.

    Both ideas are kinda so n so. The second one seem like the more fun to draw alternative right now... But the first one is more worked through n stuff.

    HELP! check the poll at the top of the page. take a fuckin stand man n VOTE! make a change...

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    Hey man gotta go with a mixture, how about as he is chasing his father, or trying to find him, he meets this opposite of his and they fight, and are really like equals, so both of them, beaten to a pulp by one another, find a new found friendship, or rivalry. The new guy agrees to help find the others father, who by what he knows of is still alive and running around the city.
    Not sure what you think of this. The ending sentence kinda sucks, but you can figure the rest out or go with one of the other of your ideas.

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    Hey
    Very nice style in here, great stuff

    For your comic, i personally like your first version. It would be nice to get some background informations about hector, and the meeting with his father seems a good way to get this in. You don't have to make it that long, so you can have fun drawing other stuff after it. Just my opinion

    Can't wait to see more of those pages, keep at it

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    A conceptlike thingy. This is kinda what the new guys house would be like.



    Replies n stuff later.

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    you gon' get GOOD when you're older. this shit is bananas. need i explain the spelling? ussum.

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    You have a great handle on form, gesture and all but your digital applications don't retain too much quality. Work on your brushes (I'm sorry I don't have much experience on the computer). Best might be traditional experimentation.

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    the second one for sure, it kinda cool ,and the action will keep you from getting bored. It'll be fun for the readers too.

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    I personally think the second idea sounds cool, two characters to develope, and that house is wicked! Kinda Mad Max feel you know?.. Anyways I don't think you should care about what anybody say, just goes with the one you think will be more fun. Or do both! Two 5-page stories?.... hehe

    that picture where you used ref. is awesome! the nose is perhaps a bit crooked as someone mentioned earlier but damn nice. And perhaps try to experiment more with the different brushes! keep up the good work pidde

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    Just trying to keep this floating... update comin soon hopefully, I've started a new tactic whitch is workin on many pages at a time, so updates will be scattered.

    Assoir - Thanks a bunch for your continous support man! N I hope you're right.

    Listing - Thanks for coment n crit! Im planning to do more traditionals in the future, but I wont give up the digis, I'll be sure to try to improve the flow n such in 'em.

    Bhanu - Yeah, I have gone for that one now. I think it was a good choise. I'll show stuff soon.

    Sarcophagus - Yes, the second one it is. Good that ya like it!
    Yes, I'll go over the nose again. Hmm, brushes is a mystery to me. I'll try!

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    Portrait revisited. What do ya think? My opinion is that the first one looks more raw. So I personally like the first one more. Wright sumthin.


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    Hm hard to say which one is greatest. One thing I do know is that the eyes are beautiful!

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    This last one is a keeper.

    I found some really old Phil Hale stuff in a use magazine store. I'll try and remember to dig it up for you.

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    oops. I was looking at the first page when I posted that last comment. Anyway, I'll still try to dig up that old Phil Hale stuff. Great stuff on this page too though.

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    the last one is really cool and i like your monsters hrhr.
    keep at it

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    Sarcophagus - Yeah, its up to me anyways, so I guess I'll just take whichever one I like the most! Har har! He looks more badass on the first one by me...

    Ben Olson - Thanks for the drop by meng! Hey very glad ya like the stuff!
    Them Hale pics sounds very very interesting, I find it hard to find his stuff. So that sounds terrific! Lookin forward to it. Seya 'round!

    Haxxor - Thanks piles my man! I'll swing by soon.

    Now for a lil' update. Its once again sumthin for the comic. I'll do 4 of these, futuring Hector carrying a dead Skull(oh YES, he is killed of on page 2. haha no one will care.) out from the city.




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    Wow man that is nice! it looks like hes going in to the city in the last picture though, but then it strikes me - perhaps it is his home.

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    duuuude, how's things?? Incredible effin' work. The last updates are very nice. I especially like the story telling on todyas update. Reminds me a bit more of comics like sandman.
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    Hey Orifice, these digital paintings are looking very solid. Very nice!

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    Thanks for tha nice replies people!

    Sarco - Damn. It aint his home and he aint goin in to the city. Sum text 'll explain it when I put the page together. Cool that ya likezit! Update yo SB soon man, this is starting to become bs hehe! Upload the comic stuff why dontya!

    Tiger - Things are rollin on nicely I guess. Bussy bussy though... Very glad ya like the sheeh meng!;D Yes, I like how things are comin along right now! I shall just have to look up sandman, think I've heard of it. Thanks for the stopby, I'll visit when things slow down a bit. Or before.

    Bendragon - Thanks alot mister! Very glad they please your eye.

    One more. Walking through the frying hot suburbs...


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    damn, this new stylish thing you got going is so rad.
    Thanks for showing.
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    hey man, doing really well on these culdasac community paintings, the character is carrying a dead skull, right. Looking really cool.

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    Tiger - Heh, thanks again bud!

    Envisor - Thanks so much for likeing! Dont really know what ya mean with culdasac community... Skull is his buddy, the main characters. If ya were wondering?

    Heres the last one. I'm happy with me custom hyena sign!


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    Wow man you're right about that sign its amazing! Damnit man you already have a style of your own and its awesome. Keep up the good work! looking good with the comic

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