Ninja Elf!!!

Join 500,000+ Artists

Its' free and it takes less than 10 seconds!

Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop

Results 1 to 14 of 14

Thread: Ninja Elf!!!

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    Seattle, WA
    Posts
    170
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Ninja Elf!!!

    actually a Warden from warcraft

    i wanted to post this in its all finished but i dont think i stack up too well against those pro artists there

    i wanted a better bg but i messed up and used the bg grey color to "erase" so its not easy for me to paint on a layer below

    any helpful crits/comments are appreciated, thanks!

    Ninja Elf!!!

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    May 2003
    Location
    Hudson River valley, NY
    Posts
    16,212
    Thanks
    4,879
    Thanked 16,669 Times in 5,020 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Tell me about your light source. Is it bright or dim? Close or far away? Point (focused) or diffuse? Where is it, exactly, in relation to the character? High, low, front, back, side? And why?


    Tristan Elwell
    **Finished Work Thread **Process Thread **Edges Tutorial

    Crash Course for Artists, Illustrators, and Cartoonists, NYC, the 2013 Edition!

    "Work is more fun than fun."
    -John Cale

    "Art is supposed to punch you in the brain, and it's supposed to stay punched."
    -Marc Maron
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    Seattle, WA
    Posts
    170
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    i placed it a bit on her right side, in front of her and a little above her head level (maybe 3-4 feet away)

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Posts
    53
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Love It ....

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  6. #5
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    Massachusetts
    Posts
    4,881
    Thanks
    286
    Thanked 1,439 Times in 259 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Tell me about what she is doing. Is that a knife she is holding? What is she doing with it? And why? What emotions is she feeling?

    I think you are awesome, and I wish you the best in your endeavors, but I am tired of repeating myself, I am very busy with my new baby, and I am no longer a regular participant here, so please do not contact me to ask for advice on your career or education. All of the advice that I have to offer can already be found in the following links. Thank you.

    Perspective 101, Concept Art 101, Games Industry info,Oil Paint info, Acrylic Paint info, my sketchbook.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  7. #6
    Join Date
    May 2003
    Location
    Studio City, CA
    Posts
    103
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    You want to draw better and stronger figures, your imagination is intact and active but what you need is a skill boost.

    Stop what you are doing, run away from the computer, and go buy this book:

    Dynamic Figure Drawing written by Burne Hogarth

    Study it every day, draw every day and before you know it... your skill will match your imagination.

    Stay Hungry

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  8. #7
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    Sweden, Uppsala
    Posts
    363
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    I like the idea
    But to help you, I will give you some crits too

    * Something bothers me with her right( our left ) leg, I get the feeling that it is slightly too long.

    * Is her eyes closed, or are they looking down on her boobs?
    I can't really tell, so try to improve that a bit.

    * How can there be light on her back, if the light source is in front, and a little bit to the right of her?

    * The forearm is a little difficult to distinguish from the chest, it looks more like a texture than another element at the moment.
    Try to make it a bit clearer.

    * It might be the design, but her waist looks extremely thin

    Other than that, cool!

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  9. #8
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    Seattle, WA
    Posts
    170
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    haah wow i just noticed you guys gave new comments while browsing through the section

    thanks!

    ill be sure to check out that book. the waist is indeed too thin, and i was never too happy with the pose, so those are things i will work on.

    again the help is greatly appreciated

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  10. #9
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    Location
    that pretty lil group of islands at SE Asia
    Posts
    41
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    (other than what the rest have said...) yeah. light source. i think your lighting different parts in different places. make it agree to each other so the image can have unity/balance. the placing of the ponytail is awkward. her head is tilted so it should have tilted with her w/c means it should be a bit straighter by now.

    nice pose, btw.

    and not all things are acquired in a book (though they will make a great reference)

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  11. #10
    Join Date
    Sep 2006
    Location
    Pasadena, CA
    Posts
    3,535
    Thanks
    236
    Thanked 307 Times in 195 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    First of all- aside from the lighting that is all over the place- you need to decide on the materials of things. You lit everything as if it were the same material- skin the same as cloth, etc.
    A good thing to try and do is classify value groups. Example- the skin is either "brigher" or "Darker" than the clothes, which will be brighter or dark than "this other part" or something. Use 3 main values in each group, so on and so forth.

    I went as far as patience would allow me... I chopped off one of her legs because it wasn't working at all. The cloth draped in an incredibley awkward way- you should be using alot of reference, ESPECIALLY for cloth. I fixed the values and sort of took the face in my own direction. I added different materials to the clothes and lit them accordingly. Hope I could help!

    EDIT: Also, I have NO IDEA what the heck her hand was doing with the knife thing.. so I tried to redraw it as good as I could... the angle of the knife is still off though.

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  12. #11
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    Los Angeles
    Posts
    20
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 94 Times in 13 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Hi Dunnlop-

    Your getting some really good advice from all the members that posted here. I did a paintover with a few things to keep in mind, I hope it helps.

    Ninja Elf!!!

    Concept Artist/Illustrator
    online portfolio: http://www.gregpro.com
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  13. The Following 7 Users Say Thank You to gregpro For This Useful Post:


  14. #12
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    Seattle, WA
    Posts
    170
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    oh wow, i cannot state how thankful i am for all of this, seriously this is huge

    i havent drawn anything recently, but this piece (which i considered one of my best) looks so much clearer and more defined with all the considerations you've given it. ill definitely be playing around with this the next time i get a chance.

    thank you again, i cannot say this enough

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  15. #13
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Norway
    Posts
    3,025
    Thanks
    32
    Thanked 157 Times in 150 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    gregpro: dude... you're a machine with these paintovers! I'm stealing them every time you post one to learn from.. hehe... thanks

    Dunnlop: Apart from all the other excellent advice, you could go for a reference shot... take a photo of a girl sitting in that pose. That way you can figure out how to approach the difficult bits... like the kneejoints.

    EDIT: I like the idea and the illo, though... gonna be cool to see where you take it from here.

    d-C

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  16. #14
    Join Date
    Sep 2006
    Location
    CT, USA
    Posts
    21
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Since I'm no good at art techniques and others have already covered the lighting issues (amazing paint overs btw), I have more general comments.
    Firstly nothing really says "ninja" other then the title. The outfit doesn't convey any thought of her being a ninja sort of character.
    Secondly, what is she doing? What is she holding? It's alright to let the viewer make up parts of their own story, but is she looking at her watch? The way the object is being held and the position of the left arm makes it hard to get beyond and look at the rest of the piece.

    CAUTION!! This post contains the opinions of someone who can't even draw a decent stick figure.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •