the heros right (in the back) hand doenst read at all.... it really took me some time (and sicklesicks comment) to even notice it and the cut off head... and it took me even longer to notice the cut through arm...
the biggest problem here imo is that everything is of equal importance.... no focus.... no artistic goal to guide your audience.
ps: just for sickelsick... " study neck atanomy" ^^
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