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    Smile Temjins stuff - update 24.7. - last page

    hello everyone
    here is concepts for adventure game called "Alternativa" and my personal works.
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    ...my website:
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    wow u are quite skillfull! alternativa sounds interesting, what is it about? (no crits too good to be critizized)

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    Not much to comment about. Very solid work. Very clean and pretty. Great light, and nice spaces. The piece with the giant clock is my favourite. Perhaps the small airplane looks a little goofy... Another angle, maybe?
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    yeah yeah...nice stuff...really sharp with the perspective. There's something about the stone face in the first post that gets at me though. I dunno...maybe it seems a little too cartoonish considering its surroundings. That face is the focal point of the whole piece...I would really play it up. Maybe add a little texture or wear from age and abuse...maybe a little something. Only suggestions though. Anyone else out there feel the same?
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    This is some amazing stuff. Your website work is astounding. You have a great ability to do high-tech design stuff and organic illustrations. Great work.
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    Some amazing stuf. Do you mind sharing some tips on how you approach the painting of each piece?

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    Realy good man, nice pics and congrats for your website.
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    These look like your best pictures yet. Keep it up man.

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    Absolutely amazing work here. Its has that look that just leaves you in awe.

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    Be careful when you flip artwork to improve composition / drama... your clock numbers are backwards. Still some great lighting and mood in these pieces...
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    Great stuff. A bit clean but could be a stylistic choice.

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    i love the clock one! great!

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    Your work is great but it has a strong similarty to the concept design of the Prince of Persia games, If you'd ask me i'd tell you it was a PoP design.

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    It's nice work so far!
    I feel like the details could be pushed more though. I like what you're doing with the geometry, but that should just be a simple starting point, simillar to a gesture drawing before a rendered piece. You're on the right track, but you still need to take it to the next level and start thinking about specific surfaces: glossy, semi gloss, matte; rough, smooth, dusty, wet, dry etc. Right now it's the same surface over the entire piece on all of them. And I'm not sure if the noise is a PS texture, or if that's a result of the 3D render, but it's lending to that generic surface thing I'm talking about. I agree that the clock piece is the best one.

    But I do love all the lighting and the overall feel... just need to go that extra bit.

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    Hello
    thank you all for postin comments and crits. its wery helpfull for me!!
    I keep this thread updated by latest pieces.

    Phuzion: thanks man, i try give my works that extra push...

    Verithin: that clock fliped position is because idea of image is "Countdown machine"...i increase visiblity of basic idea next time.

    Speedster: shure, i make some basic presentation of work process with some next images.

    Doomgriever: "Alternativa" is Czech adventure game project situated mostly in Prague enviroments.


    Here is another one, design of Police hovercraft for "Alternativa" game.

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