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    Really nice commercial, man. I like the shoot em up kind of atmosphere and how you handled the business field names. The pacing was kinda slow at times and I thought the interruption could have been replaced with the W finally setteling somewhere and the full logo assembling. But that's just nitpicking. I like it
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    Aila WELL, I could have forced myself to finish it, but it would have been shit without a total redo. But really the main reason is that I've been CRAZY busy lately. I have a website to finish, I'm part of the 'layout team' for the class pdf, so I've been having that to do, along with whatever other projects are going on.

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    Very amazing anatomy work, I have very little of my traditional sketches on the internet due to the lack of a scanner. I see that your anatomy could be in a book, but some of your faces are a bit awkward in regards to angles and the way the hair settles. But fantastic shading and light
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    You've got some amazing stuff in here, man. The dragon you posted earlier this page is superawesome, as is your take on Sonic (though I doubt it'll catch on with people like Chasethehedgehog). Loving the anatomy stuff.
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    really cool book man, your anatomy studies are paying nicely but some of your figures from imagination are still looking stiff to me, i don't know exactly what it is but maybe is the balance or the perspective. Try balancing the weight of your figure playing with the bigger masses, and use the middle line of the gesture in the figure to figure out the perspective too.
    This one http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1202096801 and this one http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1207274314 are my favourites from the latest batchs, and the gestures.
    Anyways, cool as hell book.

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    Jason, I meant it looked like one of the old atari-style shoot-em-up scroll games where you pilot a spaceship and get constantly shot at. Guess that was intentional, couldn't happen by accident Oh and, top right arm on the arm-page is awesome
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    Meemoseep Thanks. Yeah I'm hoping that I can devote some time to face studies, I'm really weak in them right now
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    Diego I know exactly what you mean with the 'stiffness' of some of my figures. It always feels like when I make a doodle it's nice and flowy, but when I sit down and think something out and try to do it all nice-like, it looks really forced. Maybe I'll try some more gestures.
    Jabo Ahhhh I gotcha. I was thinking "wtf does it have to do with that over-the-top movie?"
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    goooood one!
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    last piece is amazing
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    Hey man. That last self portrait is really nice - I like that red design elements. well done! and oh boy - what kinda dragon is that thing: mixture of dragon and predator? That looks so awesome, you should take it to the next level!
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    My god I suck at drawing from reference. I can't stand it. Whenever I draw something from ref that doesn't turn out, I can never just erase and make it better.... I get fucking angry and break my pencil and throw a little hissy fit. Then I'm ruined for the day. Whenever I try to do something after I get angry, it just makes me MORE angry. So fuck it, I'm done for the day.

    Anyways, here's a steaming pile. Not pictured: massive amounts of crumpled paper and deleted attempts at reference work.
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    Brooooooo, that one self portrait is the best Ive seen you do. Stuff is looking good, I see progress! Don't let ref get you down! go smoke some or something, eh? Then come back to it later.
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    there is some quality stuff here


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