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Thread: the Journey

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    the Journey

    I reached a point where I don't know what to do next with it. I guess it's finished?

    the Journey
    Hand in hand, we walk below the giants...
    Hand in hand, we are protecting and protected by the others...

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    I think it could use some other objects in focus besides the figures. Everything else is very blurry and I don't think its very balanced like that. I am thinking something like pillars with engravings on them in the foreground, or a ruined structure in the background, also with some architectural detail to take away form the almost total abstraction of the environment.

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