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    Question the infamous FURBALL - chara design

    i am still not finished , would be great to get some help or crits for this


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    Sweet - with sufficient shading this could turn into a Jeff Axer pic

    Crits would be that saturation throughout the image is _through the roof_. I'm seeing ~90% saturation in some parts. Almost all of the pic is outside of the CMYK gamut. Moderation!

    Also the linework is messy in some places, like the tail, and the inconsistency in line width on either side of the coat.

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    Nice powerful image!
    Agree with Snarfevs. Plus, some of the shadow and highlights strokes on his coat look a bit random in placement. Also check his right foot angle, it lays too frontal to the viewer.
    Keep it up!

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    very cute, kitties are the best

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    Snarfevs: jeff axer, wow , i´ve never heard before but have seen his website , his colours inpired me very much . looks like saturation is not much welcome, i´ll try to fix it , but do 4 sure some more shadows in it.

    fedezz:thny 4 the crits. i´ll try fix the shadows and highlight. but with the foot angle i see not much problems.

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