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    I have no fear! No, really. (Updated June 5th, 2006)

    Here we go:
    Critique welcomed, particularly as regards anatomy and shading -- I still haven't gotten the hang of using a 2B yet:

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    I have no fear! No, really. (Updated June 5th, 2006)


    And without reference, about a week and a half old:
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    ...wow
    very sweet work......
    umm the statue picture.. her neck looks a bit long :3
    but i love your art..

    i hope i get to see more

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    Thanks for replying.

    Her neck /is/ long -- I did that from reference, a black-and-white photo of a statue of the Greek goddess Urania.

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    where did u get the reference from... if you have it..post it.. up :2

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    Studies from Loomis:
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    I have no fear! No, really. (Updated June 5th, 2006)

    Help with my rendering would be greatly appreciated. I have no idea what the hell I'm doing or how to go about it, as you can see.
    My Sketchbook of Doom, Destruction, Deltoideus, and Fluffy Kittens:

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=69331

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    And more!
    I have no fear! No, really. (Updated June 5th, 2006)
    My Sketchbook of Doom, Destruction, Deltoideus, and Fluffy Kittens:

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=69331

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    I have no fear! No, really. (Updated June 5th, 2006)

    Comments appreciated. And yes, she's unfinished. She'll probably stay that way.
    My Sketchbook of Doom, Destruction, Deltoideus, and Fluffy Kittens:

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=69331

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    I have no fear! No, really. (Updated June 5th, 2006)
    My Sketchbook of Doom, Destruction, Deltoideus, and Fluffy Kittens:

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=69331

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    I have no fear! No, really. (Updated June 5th, 2006)
    My Sketchbook of Doom, Destruction, Deltoideus, and Fluffy Kittens:

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=69331

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    Look, I know I'm mediocre. I'm not the best artist evar. But I'm asking for help! Even really harsh criticism would be damn nice, as long as it told me what to work on and how.
    My Sketchbook of Doom, Destruction, Deltoideus, and Fluffy Kittens:

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    hey, you got some good stuff here, you're pretty good at capturing gestures ^^, something I need to work on. As for crits, I think you suffer similar problems to me, your shading and linework dont correspond too well in contrast, and your shading looks rushed. But I like your stuff so far, I hope to see more =]
    Thanks, Dave

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    Hey, Dave, thanks for the kind words. My shading is definitely rushed, although that's partly because I'm not sure of the planes of whatever it is I'm shading when I do it.

    Any suggestions on what to do for anatomy studies besides copying Loomis? I don't have a whole lot of money right now, and need to save it for paper and pencils.
    My Sketchbook of Doom, Destruction, Deltoideus, and Fluffy Kittens:

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=69331

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    get a mirror and draw yourself. Get as much info as you can. Also, move around and see the limits of the human body (angles and stuff).
    Since i saw you were asking for some help about rendering. Its all about shape. Outline the very sharp sides, and keep it smooth on soft shapes (muscles etc). try cross hatching alot, it really helps on understanding you subject. I dont have a specific way on doing it, just try many technics and see which comes out nicer. Patience is also a key on a nice shading, so dont rush youself while doing it !
    Hope it helps.
    Good luck!

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