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    Portfolio Critiques, please

    I want to get something nice and presentable, so I can transfer to the school of my choice. Any comments/critiques would be appreciated. I'm primarily concerned with content and layout.

    This is the 2nd prototype which had some influence from MCMA on irc.

    Portfolio Critiques, please

    Portfolio Critiques, please

    Portfolio Critiques, please

    Portfolio Critiques, please

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    Looks neato! I like your technique, in your people and back rounds, but mostly your more abstract pieces! The color usein the orange abstract is nice, but maybe some more shades, other then that I love the rough rendering of the people, it really speaks out about the feel of the work, good job, keep practicing!
    El cielo embatado y triste, para nosotros maramos entre el enjado. The bella ombra dwells within us all, the beautiful shadow, the dark muse, but only some of us chose to see it. - There is no such thing as an artist who is at least alittle crazy.

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    concerning layout i like page 3 and 4 best... the first 2 are kinda crowded. so id think about where your main interest is... those you need to sell as bestest () as possible.

    its good to show youre capable of a lot of subjects, but put the focus on what you like to do best. in the end its not as fun to be hired for something you dislike doing.

    for my taste i like your portraits best... but especially this page is crowded like no other.
    you just kept the spaces uniform, which takes out alot of energy imo comparing it to the layout of pg 3 or 4.

    [edit] oh yeah and i guess those are a4 layouts... then the font is way too big... if not for reason, dont go larger than 12 pt.
    "Have only 4 values, but all the edges you want."
    Glen Orbik

    "To any man who has slaved to acquire skill in his art, it is most irritating to have his ability referred to as a 'gift.'"
    Andrew Loomis

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