concerning layout i like page 3 and 4 best... the first 2 are kinda crowded. so id think about where your main interest is... those you need to sell as bestest () as possible.
its good to show youre capable of a lot of subjects, but put the focus on what you like to do best. in the end its not as fun to be hired for something you dislike doing.
for my taste i like your portraits best... but especially this page is crowded like no other.
you just kept the spaces uniform, which takes out alot of energy imo comparing it to the layout of pg 3 or 4.
 oh yeah and i guess those are a4 layouts... then the font is way too big... if not for reason, dont go larger than 12 pt.
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