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    2 WIP's

    My teen thunderdome entry:



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    Please help me with these, thanks!

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    I have not been to any art school or even studied art in any form so what ever i say take it with a pinch of salt.


    The first picture seems to have very large/well defined shadow for such a small light source. His gun arm seems a bit too low down and both that arm and leg don't have much definition.


    Even if i am wrong someone will come along and slap me down and tell you what you should have done so win win imo

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    I guess I'll crit the second one, since I'm new at this as well. It appears to me that you need to refine this picture more. Make the armor more detailed, also what is a man with two swords doing with a pitchfork? Unless it's supposed to be a walking stick, in which case it should really look more like one.

    I love the way the armor and the character are thought out, but why is there smoke coming from his head and shoulder? I'm a bit confused about that. Overall good, they just need some work.

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