Quike: I was afraid you were going to say that :p
VK, Fallenangel: Hope you don't mind me lumping your 2 comments together. I'm okay with four stars, it doesn(t matter in the grand scheme of things (okay i was a little pissed of at first). The question that begs to be asked tho: what does make a 5 star sketchbook. Opinions vary obviously, but i would be interested to find out how to get that start if it will entice me into becoming an even more awesome artist. So spill it!
Nettle: I thank you for this brother, very good advice as always! I've rebuilt the pic from the ground up and i've tried to take the value compo into account.
rumpenstiltzkin: Hey there, long time no read! i hope to have that pic done sometime, i'm starting to get a good feeling about being able to do that!
Gpozzo: Thanks a lot man!
So i changed a lot about that last picture, there was too much stuff not working. As always, any input is muc appreciated.
Also, there's some doodlish stuff.
It shows that you know your colors in the illustration. I really like the look that I think you're going for with a clear difference between the foreground and the further away focal point, seperated by the contrast between the deep purple shadows on the girls and the light values of the boys and the pantie. Reminds me a bit of the works by the awesome illustrator Tomioka jiro. Could turn out stunningly good if you put your soul in it.
The following sketch is awkward because the right eye is too big and too low according to the perspective you have drawn the rest of the girl in. Also her hands are too small, but you probably know all of that. It's just a sketch.
I couldn't contain myself. I'ts not quite your style, but I hope you don't mind.
Last edited by Axelga2112; March 19th, 2013 at 02:36 PM.