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    Afklamers afklaming

    Uhm, welll This is another lousy try to get a sketschbook running....
    Crits are more than welcome, cheers





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    Nice start.I like your pencil linework,but you have to work on the anatomy.
    Keep it up!

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    Aw - making me think of Wes! Apart from some anatomy flaws, I really like these. Especially like the masked guy in the first pic and the second last one - great start, bro!! Keep us updated - love to see more!!

    - d.

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    Hi guys thanks for passing by.
    My latest bunch, the last one is an wip for school, want to keep it dirty, yet not shure what to do with the background X_X,





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    Wow, wonderful characters! I'm lovin' your shading techniques.

    16 year old Aspiring Animator that is HUNGRY for critique and advice.

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    nice drawings, as said earlier, anatomy needs some work and some of the proportions are looking a bit off. Other than that, nice work. keep it up

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    You have agood control over your hands.But I think you should also trying some anatomy.There are someplaces where the proportions are off and odd.
    Keep up the good work.

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    Here wo go again,
    thanks for passing by, focused a little more on anatomy the past weeks








    Here's the finished piece, was quiet lazy, dind't change much
    Unluckily I'm studing graphic design so I had to ad some pages to satisfy my tutor ...



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    http://afklamer.bluerine.com/ca/05.0...eyecredits.jpg

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    new stuff new try X_x












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    the day will come, that ill update more than once in a month - X_x




    these are some gray thingy studies ive done from fotos ..




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    Ha! your possibly the only one reading this.



















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    Really solid sb, your anatomy has improved since the start of your sb, I like your creature concepts alot. Keep it up. Definitly keep drawing from your imagination and from life. nice sb

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    good stuff man keep posting

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    Sweet designs!!! KEEP the GREAT work UP!! thanks for the inspiration!
    http://afklamer.bluerine.com/ca/10.06/wardic3.jpg

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    You are certainly improving with your art. The recent images look great.

    cheers.

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    Thanks for passing by guys.

    Some things changed got more time to draw my own stuff, so I decided to make the sketchbook an almost daily one.



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    nice sketchbook! very creative work!

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    Ha! Thanks for the reply, diddn't expect you would chek my sb =D

    Well here's a bunch of livedrawings and another try on color












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    been doodling a little





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    some lifedrawings I made. I'm not realy satisfied with them but needed someting to post in order to keep the thing running...







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    Very high quality of stuff! You have a great talent, I like your style a lot.
    I think 5 stars for me, keep it up!
    Ciao

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    Thanks for passing by , im glad you like my stuff, one lucky day maybe I'll get those stars but i think its still a loooong way to go =D










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    Well, im trying to loosen up a little, so I've pumped up the drawing speed...









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    Nice work, man.

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    Good stuff. You capture poses very well. Especially in those observational ones. Your colours need a little more work on. I think the colours could be blended better and sometimes the background could seem too strong. I have the same problem. You could use a greyscale filter to check this contrast and make alterations from that.

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    hey guys thanks for passing by

    Bendragon You're absolutley right,... color troubles me very much, thanks for th tip

    heres the next bunch, crits are always welcome =)












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    been lazy latley X_x
    the guy in the spacy chair is a character called hoppy
    hes the vilian in a book ive read

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    the last update is great, also i like the designs mixing diferents ages.


    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=87259

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    Kickass pencils dude. Cahracters are full of expression. Would love to see some panel pages with these characters.

    "Imagination is more important than knowledge"- Albert Einstein


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    Hey! Thanks for passing by !

    Been doodlin charachters lately...


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