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    Red face Touch of Red (practice practice till i get a carrot)

    Ok, back with a new set of photos.

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    Touch of Red (practice practice till i get a carrot)

    More to come. Really wanted to post this one tho, because i like it a lot

    -Gabriel

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    Soooo, i'm trying to be a bit commercial... (damn, missed a letter in the title )

    All I need is a little feedback

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    Crits? anybody?

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    Nice one! (the red one): very nice... spicaay!

    Saints and sinners, too blurry to be any good.. sorry.

    Commercial: eh? i dont like it, but its a good study nevertheless!

    Claude
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    I agree, I like the first one. The centered composition works.

    I dont like the blue shadows in the dagger photo, what light sources did you use? Also the highlight on the dagger is blown out.

    Thats a very cool texture on the wall and the stairs. But the whole photo feels over exposed and a bit blurry. I like the idea though of saints and sinners, fits in well in my opinion. A better composition and exposure would make this a good shot!

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    Hey, Claude, Morbid, great to get feedback from you guys.

    Well, about the light in the dagger shot, i improvised this studio with a big white sheet and my little sister's red and blue toy torches. The strong light source was, of course, the camera's flash.
    Kinda studying commercial photography with it. I really dont like the pic, it says nothing to me. It has no message. Just an exercise.

    Really happy that you like Touch of red.

    Yeah... ur right about Saints and Sinners. Hope i get the chance to reshoot it.

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