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I'm currently working on this for my boyfriend, and I would appreciate some feedbacks to make this piece better. I recently learned anatomy and everything, so....don't hurt me?
so far i see...
- small head?
- long neck?
The head's not small, if anything it might be big. The proportions are so all over the place it's hard to tell.
Is it supposed to be a male or female figure, and what is (s)he supposed to be doing?
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Head's too big, and neck is a tad long yeah.
It's probably quicker for you to find a photo reference then wait for us to slowly list out all the things you ought to fix.
Elwell: Well..it's suppose to be a girl and she's summoning/casting a spell. I'll try to work on the proportions a little more and the head. thank you
JERI: Thanks, I'll try to find a photo reference and I'll work from that.
There's not enough room in the torso for a rib cage and a pelvis. Must lengthen the torso and think of those volumes inside it.
Here's an update. I lengthened her torso, as BMunchausen pointed out, and i tweaked a few things here and there
Rhineville: yeah this is my first time drawing a girl. I've been learning male anatomy. Thank you for the comment.
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Her left side seems to have slipped off a bit. And her waist is looking kinda thick to me