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    C+C are appreciated and suggestions too!

    I'm currently working on this for my boyfriend, and I would appreciate some feedbacks to make this piece better. I recently learned anatomy and everything, so....don't hurt me?

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    so far i see...
    - small head?
    - long neck?

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    The head's not small, if anything it might be big. The proportions are so all over the place it's hard to tell.
    Is it supposed to be a male or female figure, and what is (s)he supposed to be doing?

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    Head's too big, and neck is a tad long yeah.

    It's probably quicker for you to find a photo reference then wait for us to slowly list out all the things you ought to fix.
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    Elwell: Well..it's suppose to be a girl and she's summoning/casting a spell. I'll try to work on the proportions a little more and the head. thank you

    JERI: Thanks, I'll try to find a photo reference and I'll work from that.
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    There's not enough room in the torso for a rib cage and a pelvis. Must lengthen the torso and think of those volumes inside it.
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    Here's an update. I lengthened her torso, as BMunchausen pointed out, and i tweaked a few things here and there

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    You're still giving her manly proportions. I'd do a draw-over, but photoshop + mouse = crap. I'll try and see if it's decent, but hopefully someone can do a paintover to point you in the right direction.
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    Rhineville: yeah this is my first time drawing a girl. I've been learning male anatomy. Thank you for the comment.
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    did a paintover

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    Her left side seems to have slipped off a bit. And her waist is looking kinda thick to me
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