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April 25th, 2006 #1
natsch's comics and sketchbook
bout time I made one of these
an appropriate one to start things off with. This is Leah, one of the main characters in the comic I'm working on right now. I think it's going to be called Optimum, or Optimum Consumption.
This is Rich Brunelle, Economics Professor at Colombia and our protagonist.
more of Rich with the bike
ooh and this is fun:
for a comic I'm working on with a couple therapists. Basically we're adapting a self help book one of them wrote to make it accessible to teenagers.
here's a piece that went in my gallery, Ironworks, for our recent Spring Show:
Last edited by natsch; June 13th, 2006 at 12:52 AM.
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April 25th, 2006 #3
Nice start.THe girl in the first post has been drawn nicely but the the elbow of the guys with bike is not aligned properly.Reall good sequentials.But in the first panel a page 2 the guy is too small for the street compared to other panels.
keep up the good work.
April 25th, 2006 #4
April 25th, 2006 #5
you suck dude, why do you even bother?
OC looking good. reading pretty well (but then again i know what it's supposed to be).
it maybe too late for page one. but when you run into a panel that is close up, eye level or worms-eye view (what ever comes first) throw in some details like an old shoe with a hole in the sole or some broken coke bottles. I'm sure you already thought of this, but you never know.
also, for the character studies of Rich, the 3/4 zombie view. eventhough he has that blank, hypnotized expresion, pay close attention to the eyes. have the pupils facing the same way. i know it's subtle, but right now it looks off.
good start so far. keep it up boyo!!!
April 26th, 2006 #6
haha thanks Amish - yeah it always seems like such an easy thing but sometimes my pupils just don't align and I need someone else to point it out. Any tricks? I guess the mirror would help....
oh yeah page 2 is inked...
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'I HAVE NOT FAILED.I'VE JUST FOUND 10,000 WAYS THAT WON'T WORK.'
April 26th, 2006 #8
great job! those panels flow smoothly, Leah is really cool looking, *I cant wait* to see see optimum, with your style im sure it's gonna be arsome possom.
April 26th, 2006 #9
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The two pages of optimum consumption look really cool. Right off the bat I wanted to keep reading and see what the story was about.
It would even work nicely as a live scene.
April 26th, 2006 #11
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April 28th, 2006 #13
nice work i like comic