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Thread: "Emerald Dawn. Meet my foot."
April 18th, 2006 #1Registered User
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The image looks very complete. Here are things to work on for future projects:
Shading with a color other than white.
Light weight variation (or go lineartless. Woo.)
Remove unnessessary border graphics.
Original concepts instead of fanart.
April 18th, 2006 #3
Everything above, plus anatomy.
Don't leave the black lines on your motion lines, either.
April 18th, 2006 #4
I think it's a bit hard to tell what the girl was doing before she got attacked. And the male looks like he just lifted his foot up, rather than put his whole body into the kick.
Keep at it, man
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April 18th, 2006 #5
Are they flying?