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    "Emerald Dawn. Meet my foot."

    "Emerald Dawn.  Meet my foot."

    Just a little CoH/CoV fan art I whipped up over the weekend. I'm finished with this, but do you see anything I should work on for future projects?

    Thanks,

    Naki
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    The image looks very complete. Here are things to work on for future projects:
    Composition (!)
    Shading with a color other than white.
    Light weight variation (or go lineartless. Woo.)
    Backgrounds/environment.
    Cast shadows.
    Remove unnessessary border graphics.
    Original concepts instead of fanart.
    Better faces.
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    Everything above, plus anatomy.

    Don't leave the black lines on your motion lines, either.
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    I think it's a bit hard to tell what the girl was doing before she got attacked. And the male looks like he just lifted his foot up, rather than put his whole body into the kick.

    Keep at it, man
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    Are they flying?
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