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    Dreams in Motion

    I have been gone for quite some time now. Have to try to get back in the swing of things. I just spent the last 6 months away from a pc and I must say, it feels good to be back!

    I need plenty of practice with my painting so any crits please are welcome. I'm pretty sure this piece is about done.

    So many good works on here i'm almost embarrased to show my work!

    Crit away:

    Dreams in Motion
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    Neat idea, but that rear foot needs to over farther (into the pic.) Looks like she's about to fall over.
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    thx, i did this sketch a long time ago and recently painted it. Some of you may have seen the b/w sketch from before.

    atm my scanner is out of commission due to a missing power cable... once i get that up and running i will post some of my more recent work.

    thx for crit!
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    The first thing i noticed was how her back was kind of "missing". I agree with zap with the leg and also that the foot on her left leg is at an uncomfortable and unnatural angle, maybe it should point away from us a little bit more.

    Oh and about her back, ill try to explain as good as i can with my limited engrish. The spine on her doesnt seem to exist or have and super straight line down to the pelvis. There is no sign of an visible arch on the back.
    The eye on her face is a little bit to long out, maybe push it further back to her ear a little bit.
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    thx crash, nice observation on the back.. she does not have a spine. most of her internal organs have been replaced with mechanics. I didn't even notice the eye thing, i will keep a better 'eye' on that in later works, ha.
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