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April 2nd, 2006 #1
Leviathan done? C&C plz UPDATE 4TH APRIL
workin on this now.. leviathan and a lady with it manipulating water..
someone asked me 2 do something with a lady manipulating water and leviathan here so this is what i have now
fist i made a sketch.. about 4.. this one i choose
composition wise the lady was to much to the edge of the drawing so when i started coloring i made the pic a bit bigger towards the right as u can c..
so far i have..
the lady i just gave some basic colors to get the idea
only thing i did already pay some attention 2 is the leviathans head.. im pretty happy with how it turned out..
i searched multiple refferences on the the leviathan and use m
the rocks in the front have to change allot 2.. the look to plastic like at the moment and arrent shaped very realisticly imo
plz give allot of crits.. and some kind words to hehe
Last edited by Joey-b; April 4th, 2006 at 11:34 AM.
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wow it's really coming along nicely.As for crits I'd have to agree with the rocks in the front.I really like the (spell?) coming from her hand it's really good looking so far as well as the leviathan keep up the good work.
April 2nd, 2006 #3
id suggest giving more shape to the neck. the whole creature looks like it's the same thickness. also might suggest habving the girl scantily clad rather than totally nude? good color job so far.
April 3rd, 2006 #4
thx for the crits u guys.
ill try to get the neck to look better... but leviathan is kinda snake like.
about the totally nude part.. whats wron with some good ol nudity?
some more crits or none?
April 3rd, 2006 #5
Hi, If I may suggest; If you were to move the girls left arm and hand a bit( the one just hanging there) to a more dramatic hand gesture-kinda like shes holding the spells tail with it- it would look better- I agree with Grei-you should definately give her some clothing- also she looks as though her leg is up a bit, but the belly button is too close to the left perhaps moving it further to the right? or bringing the leg down. -but then again Im not one to talk about proportions cause I got my own issues! over all the idea is great and you have a great start!
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April 3rd, 2006 #6
jLAlfaro - thx for taking ur time.. i c what u mean with the belly.. ill make it better in the next update.. although i already fixed it up a bit before i even read ur post .. the arm thing ur saying is a good idea.. ill c if i can get that to look any good thx!
and the clothing is there now
so here is the new update
made the neck a better shape (good crit thx for that)
the horns are there a bit now
sky detailed out a bit ..
woman has clothing and a face
textured the leviathan.. (does it look any good?)
added some slime on his mouth
messed around with all the colors
still have allot to do
but i think its about 50 to 75 % done now
C&C and idea's still very welcome
April 3rd, 2006 #7
hey joey, tijdje geleden dat ik je heb gezien hier, wat kan ik zeggen, je bent weer bezig met uitmuntend werk niet echt kritiek voor je, behalve dat het allerbovenste gedeelte van de dijbeen aan de linkerkant er naar mijn gevoel beetje raar uitziet, met de hoek naar le derriere, maar dat kan ook aan mij liggen 8) wat meestal het geval is ^^
April 3rd, 2006 #8
cool job on the water spell and hand perspective. i think the navel is a bit off center, and you should soften the clavicle shading as it gets toward the sternum. leviathan's neck looks better, but i think you should give him actual eyes. white glowy is kinda cliche i think. just my opinion though.
April 4th, 2006 #9
thx for ur crits guys.. ill use them wisely.. (or die trying) hmm the eyes i dont know.. u know why they always look like that.. because it looks the best
thx for takin ur time
April 4th, 2006 #10
well this is what i have now.. any final crits ??
April 4th, 2006 #11
hmm I like the pic but I do have a crit:
It might be interesting (maybe for a re-work or a next time) to place the woman on top of some rocks and have the sea serpent reaching towards her out of the water. This would connect all the different pieces (foreground - middle - background) together. What you have now is a woman who seems to dissappear in the rocks she is standing on and the serpent is coming from somewhere from her side. The oceanic background doesn't really play a big role now and it might be fun to include it more.
I realise these were crits you can't really do much with any more so I'll provide another one. The magical waving beam, think about how it might generate illumination on the woman, the serpent, the rocks surrounding her.
April 4th, 2006 #12
thx allot for the crits.. hmm yeah composition wise it could've bin better.. i always go wrong there haha
as for the ilumination.. it's supposed to be water.. hmm.. think i should've done better then.. ill try and rework it.. thx for ur time!
April 4th, 2006 #13
one last crit from me, id suggest smoothing out the skin tones a little more. it looks kinda blotchy. also the shadow around the chin makes it look way too protruded, and her left eyebrow comes over to the middle of her forehead.