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    Campfire Layout Version 2

    Hi folks,

    Last weekend I posted this layout for a Flash animation. I got a few tips and made a revised version. Does the second version look any stronger? First one is on top, new one is beneath.




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    I think the colours are more consistant with night-time. It's definitely a stronger piece. In your animation, will there be a fire in the fire pit that will be responsible for the warmer light?

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    Yes there will.

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    Definite improvement, looks much more like night. I would put a shadow under the fire ring as well. It will look odd when you animate the fire without it:


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    Hey cool, thanks for the sketch! I'll definitely be implementing that.

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