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    Standing guy

    Just posting something that is pretty much done but I figured I would get a quick crit. Always trying to get better and all that. Thanks in advance.

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    the shoulders are a bit broad but i'm sure with this much detail that is done on purpose. the only thing standing out to me right now is the shirt and the hair...maybe more detailing but that's all. the lighting is really good.



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    Thanks. The shoulders are half on purpose and half my families genetics I have broad shoulders and most of my family does, as well, so smaller frames look a bit odd to me. The hair is suppossed to be slicked back so it is pretty undetailed on purpose. The shirt could use a bit more. I had too much detail so I pushed it back. I guess it too much. Thanks for that catch. And thanks for replying.

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    It's really just (his) right shoulder that seems too far out, and I think that the chest is too thick. like...his solar plex's shouldn't be so rounded. Maybe I'm just seeing things. -shrug-

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    I love the attitude, this guy is just waiting to kick someone's ass. Very nice job on the shading, too. If his hair is indeed slicked back, I'm wondering if maybe a bit more highlights where the light source would shine on it would be in order?

    I said I loved the 'tude, right?

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