Last edited by j a k e; August 20th, 2010 at 09:45 AM.
You're doing very well for someone your age. However, you may want to check out your face profiles. Some seem ever so slightly off.
Nice figures though.
and here's another.
Hey, not bad mate. I agree, though with Moysturfurmer on the faces. Your profiles seem a little off, unless this is how these people actually look, of course (that is, if you're using reference). Usually the plane that the lips and chin lie on are opposite to what you are drawing (unless of course they have an underbite)
Hey guys thanks heaps for those crits, i know now what my current aim to improve and thats the shape of the jaw and connection of the body to head. thanks guys.Just to let you know i havent used any ref for anything in these pages .But hey! only way to improve is to do more (and maybe use some ref )
ill keep on truckin!
Here's some more i just found. Very quick doodles.
30 second head
this afternoons doodles
a minute or two
Hey, nice progress here, i see a lot of good stuff here. Maybe u should try portrets later, because they are rather hard to do when u just start drawing (yes, i have the same problem). Anyway, don't be discouraged, and do more of those studies.
Check put my schetchbook if you please
I've got a couple more here, then ill update tomorrow or so when i get some more done. I'm practicing pretty hardcore.
pretty quick little doodles
thanks for stopping by my SB.
nice stuff... I'm really liking the confidence in your lines!!
Damn... if I drew like you did at 16.. and was commited to improving......
Your bodies are looking very nice.. now start working on heads and legs...
Thanks T-raktor and Glik, every crit is appreciated.Im drawing alot lately and ive been trying to draw from life as much as possible.Heres a few doodles from today, a little large picture size sorry about that. just a few minutes each, just having some fun.
these are really nice, man, you're getting there.
My one general crit would be to watch your line quality. What I mean by that is when you're searching for shapes and whatnot you tend to make these really dark sketchy lines that areen't very efficent. Like arm here or the right shoulder for example http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...j/minione4.jpg
keep it up, lets see some more work