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    Long time lurker...first time poster

    This was done a while ago...I would like to get back to painting soon. Feel free to comment. Thanx guys!



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    Great form, color and mood. The selective focus on the subject as opposed to the environment is a great compositional device and the stark warm and cool color contrast on the face looks great. I think it'd be cool if you took it a little further as that patch of blue on the cheek and jaw looks a little too isolated. Perhaps it'd be appropriate on the ear and hands as well? Just a thought. Over all, I'd say this is a success.

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    Exo: Hey thanx so much for looking/critiquing my work. I don't know why it took me so long to post anything. I completley agree with your comment...Most helpful!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Exo
    Great form, color and mood. The selective focus on the subject as opposed to the environment is a great compositional device and the stark warm and cool color contrast on the face looks great. I think it'd be cool if you took it a little further as that patch of blue on the cheek and jaw looks a little too isolated. Perhaps it'd be appropriate on the ear and hands as well? Just a thought. Over all, I'd say this is a success.

    Everything he said! Pretty dope work!

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    exo is right, the blue spot is a bit out of place.
    but the piece itself has a lot of interest.
    definitely go back to painting asap.

    keep it up

    sparth

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