The first one's really nice.
Keep going my friend dood!
Thanks for the comment in my sb man. You've got great stuff here like i said before.
You might want to do some more hand studies though. You should also watch your lines, don't make em too messy!
anatomy is improving and would like to see this one developed and refined more: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1171782847
The latest update is freaking great. Expecially the last face is so freaking awsome, all tho i cant figure out whats happening with the other eye with an somekind of an mask thingy on the face. But dont mind me im just me. Keep them coming ill keep my eye on you.
Wakazou: Thank you!
Razorb : thanks glad you like!
Frostsnake: Thank you!
TheGnoll: haha glad to hear a compliment about the faces from you
Asoir: Thanks man!
Sonja: Whoa! Thanks tons for the critque! I already took it in observe and working on it! thank you!
MrJoe: man, thanks! its cool that someone notice my progress.
I don't know if I answered you already.. but how I did was to make the line art in one layer, then when I was "done"
I made a new one, a copy of the line art, and blurred it, not to hard but I think it looks cool
Caddlewick: Thank you!
Pawlack; Really ? that means a lot to hear I can inspire someone
Ashrumm: Glad to see you man! Thanks for the comment!
Frostsnake: haha , thank you!
Darktwin: Thanks bud! I will!
Call0ps : thanks! I need to spend more time
wake101: Thanks for your support! means a lot.
Jake : You too man! And thanks for the support as well! means a lot coming from you!
OldNoobie: thank you lee! glad to hear
m0uS3r : thanks! Well, I don't have skype installed any longer.. I try to download it laters
Arekkusu: No problems, and cheers !
Bendragon: Thanks for continued support.. I need to start posting more in other peoples sketchbooks.. Im so lazy
thanks! and no, no life drawing =( I wish though
Envisor : thanks, Although I never post my studies.. just a few once in a while. Most stuff in this sketchbook
is from imagination.
Frostsnake: thanks again! Yeah I worked hard on that avatar.. Like 5-6 minutes
Darktwin : hahah thanks! it feels good to have your support man !
Ryan Demita : Glad to see you in here! Fuck, I just had a look at your sketchbook, its looking
better then ever! These words means a lot coming from you!
Tex, You got my PM! Thanks thanks thanks man!
DanielC, Thank you!
Phobophile : Dude! I feel honored you even came by checking my stuff! You got a kick ass sketchbook already!
please, just keep posting!
Brendan N: Thanks a lot! and cheers!
Blanquish: Cheers for the crits! You already know im working on it =) *need to break my small brush habit, I just love the look of it *
Wakazou : thanks again man!
Miguelslo : ehhrm... Not my mum at least =) hehe thank you!
Razorb: Hey man! it was great fun we should do it again yes!
Asoir : Thanks! lol@exaggeration !
Designboot: Thanks man.. Lol, that you thought I was over 20 still makes me smile
DanielC : I feel like an asshole for not coming by your sketchbook more often, you post every time i show my ass in here !
That means, Thanks a lot for your support!
Nigel: Thank you!
Oldnoobie : Glad to hear! yeah that one lacks value.. it looks terrible
Mika.K : Hey man! thanks for coming by! I saw you started a new book, I make sure to come by!
And heres something im working on. I dunno if it was worth updating for though... Master copy
Wow Dile you have some INSANE work here, amazing !! The last looks really great so far, I don't feel as if I can crit on it, jus don't rush like you said, thats gonna turn out really good!
really nice man, thought I'd pop by to say that this http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1171782889
is very very good. Did you use any refrence?
Wish I had been this good when I was your age.
hehe, anyways, cheers keep it up man!!
nice stuff, keep at it!
you've got many years left to hone your skills!
on the last one, remember to work from large brushes to small ones, don't get caught up in the details to early!
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Wow you are truly inspirational. The rate at which you have improved over the course of this book is amazing. My eyes are craving for more.....
Guys, Tigermilk, Hurricane , Wakzou, Drunkenmonkey, and redx, Thanks a lot!
Just did a quick, very quick portrait testing out, in a exaggerated way what hurricane told me. Took me 15 minutes and its my last update for this holiday
Going to "skii" in the "Vasalopp" .. the Lite-version of it though
Cya! and thanks a lot for the support!
*needs a lot of work*
yay for master studies!!! it would be cool to see you really push this piece to a polished level, more polished than anything you've ever done! heh, i know you've just started, but it would be a good learning tool me thinks, you can't really go wrong with a master study since you are just observing and copying.
anyway dude, i really like this thing here it would help with clarity if you got some cast shadows in there, but its cool, it shows you have confidence and control too, each stroke does what you want it to.
i also really like this guy in the bottom left on this page, cool marks
keep it up dude, great stuff!
love your work, man!! Without a doubt you're going to become a great artist.
hey bud where are you planning to study after high school?
glorious stuff mate! ive really enjoyed your stuff for some time, youre really getting a strong visual image vocabulary...and then today i click on your profile... OMG are you really 14?! gad you people make me feel like a geezer and im only 20! not fair at all man you're way too good for your age
keep it up
awesome work Dile! keep at it
Kronos: I try to do that thanks a lot for the feedback, much appreciated!
Lee: Thanks, I try
yungks.ae : thanks man, I don't really know where to study.. right now my marks looks good.. but I heard a couple of times that any good art school accept students on their portfolio...so I have along way to go before I can get into some good artschool.. my grades and my work are on the same level kinda.. mediocre =( thanks for coming by man!
btw, where you planning on study yourself ?
Mrgrumble : oh thank you man! hehe actually im 15 in *counting on fingers* 9 days ! Im been on CA for a year now.. Joined on 3rd March!
Thanks for the feedback!
Asoir: lol! Thanks man!
Chrishly : Glad you like
uhm, heres some "in-car-drawing-while-almost-asleep-on-bumpy-road" drawings. Bought an extra moleskine on my "holidays" , just realized how good it feels to draw on again
I post the rest later..
Just realized my post count 500 post and only about 40 in my own book ... I want a 2:1 ratio not a 1:2 ... but
its damn hard to update two times everytime you should check some buddys sketchbook.. and I often make small post in the lounge and the FF section.
hmm I try to stay daily... at least maybe I can get my sketchbook to get more posts then I have myself.. That be pretty cool =)
Last edited by Dile_; February 26th, 2007 at 04:48 AM.
ello dile, good to see some arts!
the pen female faces show promise, keep messing around with pens, they are invaluable tools.
I reckon finding the right balence between loose and tight control lines, needs to be achieved.
good pen companions are your copics, and brushpen, and watercolour
apply washes with the watercolour to get some funky effects
the brushpen is also great for black spots for stuff like hair, and shadows
a good light learning exercise is to get a book with lots of faces, draw them out with pen, and use the brushepen for dark spots etc. great exercise for remembering it, because you simplify with only one value(black)
your pencils stuff OK, in terms of rendering, but really needs the extra minute (slow down buddy )
your lines are probably your weak point, sorta too uncontrolled and not well thought out( like your not happy with the line, so you try and strengthen it by going back and forth, this looks bad)
I read phil hale never uses an eraser. If you see his drawings he is loose but his lines never look bad.
the difference between looks and messy is that loose looks confident, and messy doesnt
this is a nice page, the design is not bad, thumbnails are good
the torso+head drawing on the right is a perfect example of loose.
like to see more of that!
remember, long swooshy lines!
keep up the good work mate!
would love to see some self portraits, some finished drawings, some hands and studies from the mirror, and also some more thumbnails that you turn into a more finished character
just for motivational purposes, Phil Hale turned Pro at 17 yrs old!
You've got a thorough understanding of value, which is great. And I saw a few of your digitals, which I thought looked very good and tight, the two environments in particular.
I agree with Blanquish about your line quality, but he already covered everything I'd have to suggest (and then some), so I'll leave it at that.
Anyhow, good work, keep it up!
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Haha, if I were you I'd sell some shit. Just to get money to assure my hands ;D
Keep it up, that last portrait is great. Try some more "out of the box" (i.e) more paints, perspective and such. But don't stop your characters, they're great
Nice dile, good looking drawings!!, I would also suggest not to focus on rending so much, I would say form is the most important thing to get down before rendering. I agree with DanielC, try to focus on the planes also when drawing anything. Well off to class, Keep up the hard work!!
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