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    damn i forgot to subscribe to this thread. anyway lookin good keep on rocking. for the mutant warrior axe guy, consider his overall shape. right now its not dynamic, its very dull. look at the shape of the body as just a 2d, graphic shape and see if it still interests you? i think not- right now its just a blob. try bringing the arms out more, and giving him a twist at the hips, and it will work even as a 2d sillhouette.

    also, as a general rule you shouldn't crop at the weapon. its similar to cropping at the ankles/wrists/neck.

    rock on 4 life


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    phew, the last update is pretty impressive...nice colors and mood in the second version, nice design for the building, looks huge.Make sure you define the elements in the foreground and middle ground.Use human shapes to help crate sense of scale, and adjust perspective on the smaller buildings in front of the wonder, they seem to be leaning forward. leaning forward )always remember where your horizon line is.Let's see how you work on the sky and atmosperic depth...good work, and good idea about the self crit

    cheer up dude, and keep 'em coming

    ciao

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    hey dile. Your piece for Teen challenge 20 looks good, however i think you should make the top of the tower fit onto the page, will give it more of a size impact.
    Oh and btw, i think its sometimes nice to take a break from updating your CA sketchbook, take some time out, do some doodles, practice in some areas and then come back after a while and show us what you've learnt.

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My own place to put sketches and doodles, feel free to leave some sort of feedback, critique is very appreciated.

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    fantastic. looks...familiar

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  • Alright, moved the picture here:
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    hey man, some times walking away and taking a break from something for 10mins can really help when you come back to it, when you do create a new layer above it and draw in all the corrections and stuff like a perspective grid or contruction of your pic in blocks and balls and then once youve done that go back and fix it all. Maybe this will help. cya man.

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    Grymma teckningar! arbeta vidare!

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    hey ,pencils re really coming along now.the anatomy a bit wobbly on some but yeh .Maybe try adding Some linewieght even if your gona render it.

    keep it up .james
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    Good work
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    Abow, det är gryyymmtt bruuusshaaan.

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    The last one is really messy, I can't tell much of anything in the pic; When using textured brushes and things, try to make the focal point either textured or untextured, and make everything else in the piece somewhat of the opposite of that. Also don't replace small details with textured brushes, and in a speed paint don't make too many small details. Keep it fast and general (pretty much what I told Evil_Sloth)

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    Oh, glad you swung by and told me you'd changed your username. This is fantastic. Nice penmenship. When did you get that? I must have missed something. or maybe it's just the Moleskine. Fabolous sketchbooks, ey?
    keep at this.
    Like this robot alot. And the one to the right has the rythm of bridgman. It's paying of big time. http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1164570219
    both the mask and the character is tight, like the hip area especially. Glad to see that you've gotten so far already. http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1164570630

    Roawr and hugs!

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    hey guy good work!!
    do you like draw by ballpen?
    i really like the first one..keep drawing mate
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    tnx for replying in my sketchbook

    you've got some promising stuff here. a lot of good rendering and nicely weighted character! there are some anatomical issues here and there, but you definetely seem to be heading in the right direction!
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    You need to show some patience in your work. You might have a lot of energy, but trying to control it is what's hard. With your last painting (adding on to the comment from Justin) don't get carried away with the brushes, you should treat them like a color pallete.

    Choose a few brushes to work with, and only those, also for a crit with your last picture: It looks washed out and smudged, use harder edges on certain areas of interest to pop it out a bit such as the building. And don't be afraid to get darker in some areas, choose a "hard" color. Keep up the work, and don't lose focus.

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  • Asoir: thanks man

    GuitarJames: Your right, and thanks for the crit! Thanks!!!

    wakazou: '

    Pawlack: thank you!!

    Pencilator: Oh thank you! these words means a lot coming from you!
    Thanks a lot!

    MRPLOT: thanks man! ball pen ? nah, dont use that to much, but sure
    it can be great as well! I guess its a great tool as well, I mainly use it for writing though
    Thank you

    squidmonk3j: Hey! thanks for dropping by yourself! glad to see some crits, thank you !



    And heres some shit, thats the only thing I have to scan for now since most my sketches are in school atm, I be updateing more laterz!
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    Cool rendering style, and great sense of volume! I like your works man
    Keep it up
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    Cool sketches,you should color some!

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    some of the sickest shit ive seen, you are a drawingmachine

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    Wow sweet. Your already kicking my arse down, nice!

    I'd try and lengthen your rendering strokes, it'll take time to steady out your arm ( use your arm not your wrist/hand - that way you can do loooooong strokes ) but that'll improve with practice. Loving the last one. Keep it up =)

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    hey great update dile, keep it up brother.

    Cheers

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    Hey guys, glad to get your comments / support,
    I started a new sketchbook after my old account started to fuck with me when I tried to login, I thought it was time anyways,

    Go here to see new stuff:


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    Fuck yeah Dile
    Keep rocking! Always a pleasure to see your stuff
    Some anatomy-stuff in the one with the two dudes and the robot, but nothing major

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    nice work man.. i like the pic next too the one done in sketcher the portrait lookin one vv nice...

    oh also what is sketcher ? ;O an online drawing program ? i dont understnad heh

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    hey, Like the second one.Try pushing the values andmaybe try out using a really soft pencil like 8b.
    Keep it up
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    this new stuff is cool, I'm not sure about this new account and all, but i guess change is good sometimes

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