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    Smile Young Severus

    Well the cartton snape wasnt very popular ^_^' but thats ok, im here to improve. just can you keep the critiques to a lower level, im a bit too sensative to handle them yet >_>
    anway, this picture tries to reflect the happy inocence that young severus felt when he was a child. he wasnt always a miserable git. this was done in ink, copic markers and coloured pencil
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    his right eye seems a little strange. Might want to move it out a tad.
    Nice feeling with this though. Good work.
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    he mus thave suffered a lot of trauma to have changed so much...nice pic though
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    Aw! HE's so cute. I like this one better than the other - it's easier for me to see him looking happy as a kid, I guess. Is this done in a traditional medium? Doesn't look computer-colored - very cool

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    Really like this one better. Really dig the coloring and the hair is pretty sweet.
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    I agree with JKarwin54 on the eye but overall its really sweet. I love the colouring on the scarf, looks all fuzzy.

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    SO sweet ...

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    Awww this is very adorable...makes me wanna give him a hug. his left eye does seem a little off but I still admire the work and the color drawn into the piece

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    Agree with everyone here, this is a major improvement. Lighting on the coat is all nice, his hair highlights seem a bit scratchy though and his right eye is definately off.

    The major crit I have with this is that if it wasn't for your description, there is no way I would have picked this as Severus. The very best fanart manages to communicate not only who the character is but how the events in the pic relate to the story, and you have not managed to convince me this is Severus. Although considering how chibi this is, that may be well impossible.

    Keep it up, this is a definite improvement. I'd love to see some anatomical studies from you in the Critique section though.
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    Except for the eye I also think his left leg seems to be shorter (or maybe I'm just seeing things).

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    Keep it up, this is a definite improvement. I'd love to see some anatomical studies from you in the Critique section though.
    What he said.

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    Whoa! It's snapesnogger from deviant . Hey! Okay back to the point. It's adorable, I think, but yeah I agree with people about the eye. It's not traumatically off, it's just...I don't even know how to describe it. It's really cute, and the fuzziness of the scarf is awesome. I like the effect there. Overall nice work .
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    his left hand seems broken as does his left hip or femur.

    Also, he is missing a nose.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ruzkin
    Agree with everyone here, this is a major improvement. Lighting on the coat is all nice, his hair highlights seem a bit scratchy though and his right eye is definately off.

    The major crit I have with this is that if it wasn't for your description, there is no way I would have picked this as Severus. The very best fanart manages to communicate not only who the character is but how the events in the pic relate to the story, and you have not managed to convince me this is Severus. Although considering how chibi this is, that may be well impossible.

    Keep it up, this is a definite improvement. I'd love to see some anatomical studies from you in the Critique section though.
    im learning anatomy at school right now sorry if a was rude to you before, i had had a pretty bad day ^^;

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    pretty cute image, altho snape is way out of character in this image, and almost all your images that portray him. He is still a slippery greasy kid, who is deep into the dark arts, no mather how cute you would want him to be

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    Cute Snape. Although it would be nice to see how you draw something other than Snape once in awhile...

    I'd also like to say, don't worry too much if people snark on you for anime/manga styled art, I get the same. :/ This community seems to be based on the whole Marvel/DC/Wizards of the Coast, etc. styles (primarily realistic and often slightly grotesque) and they don't take kindly to anime, cute or otherwise. Mind you, they have a slight point; a lot of budding artists *do* just copy anime and never learn anatomy or anything. I think the fact that you've only posted pictures of Snape (which are, admittedly, ooc, although I don't have a problem with that) is only going to convince them that you only know how to draw one thing over and over.

    So. Prove to them that they're wrong. Post up art, and show them that YES, you do know what you're doing, you just prefer to draw in an anime style, and if they don't like that, pssh, whatever. They can go look at the other thousands of threads with mostly-naked chicks and huge boobs that are floating around here. Of course, make sure that you DO know what you're doing before attempting this.

    And that's my two cents. I'm out.

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