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    a book cover i'm finishing up.the big robot thing on the right that looks strangely similar to the iron giant will be gone soon,i just placed him there so i could use the light its emitting.i have another robot design in mind.lemme know whatcha think.Not very far into it obviously,but this is the place to come for good constructive opinions.

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    Since it's a book cover, I reckon the protagonist should take up more space in the image than they do now. It will be easier for viewers to make out their reactions to the robot and it should reduce the amount of uninteractive stuffs in the pic. I reckon the amount of space the trees (at the top left) are taking up should be reduced, I don't think they contribute to the picture as much.
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    thank you for the feedback,i had an idea for that space you spoke of above the kids,but i will take what you said into consideration
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    another update.its starting to come together a bit more now.i'll hopefully be done by tomorrow evening.

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