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    WIP: dawn

    below are some process shots from an illustration i'm working on for my company's website. i have a few more illustrations to complete, but i was curious to get some comments on what i have so far.


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    here is the "final" illustration. the bonsai from previous versions is going to be the nav and won't actually be a part of this illustration.

    http://www.vainfantasy.com/art/main.jpg

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    maybe check the perspective on the gate/fence, it looks a little off

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    yeah it's been bothering me, but i can't tell what's off. maybe lower the backend of the gate?

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    i was thinking that it looks a bit like it's leaning backwards, there's porbally going to be a pretty defined cast shadow on it too since it's a sunrise. the colors in the sky and the profile of the mountins in the distance beatiful by the way.

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