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    ChOW "Birth of Venus" revisit -- up for crits

    check the current ChOW brief for more details on this week's assignment.
    Title: Paparazzi's Venus

    ChOW "Birth of Venus" revisit -- up for crits
    high key, color saturation and "compressed" depth of field/perspective are part of my concept (explained a bit by the title), and she's not supposed to be the standard 8-heads tall and slender standard model, either. but i'm concerned i may have goofed the upper body or arm length proportions a bit. after spending a few days with her i have trouble seeing the possible flaws, and if i did screw up i don't think it's egregiously. i've rechecked my refs and still can't decide. for me it's elusive, maybe not even an issue, but i wanna get it right as still have a few hours to revise if necessary.

    thanks for any feedback.
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    Shoulders could be a little bit too narrow (or not ). otherwise I can see no issues with what you mentioned
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    hahaha i love what you did with the shell on the floor there

    p.s. blog
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    i like the rac focus
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