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watch your balance! some of your figures are still off kilter.
also watch your faces and parts of your hands, they don't have form to them. they just all feel soft and like there isn't any structure under them, especially your faces. too egg shaped add some more detail to them, watch where things curve in or maybe add some scars or freckles or something to set them apart.