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    ====My SketechBooks (Update 30-05_Drawing from Bargue)====

    Hi all
    this is my first SketechBooks here
    I just starting to drawing in the last 4 days.
    so And i need crit to motivate and push my self


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    ====My SketechBooks (Update 30-05_Drawing from Bargue)====
    Last edited by goro_kiss; May 30th, 2006 at 11:11 AM. Reason: update


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    Welcome!

    I hope you can take my criticism I try to keep it constructive.

    You're not ready for human anatomy.

    Try drawing from life. Assemble a still life out of simple object that appeal to you. Light them with a sideways light source. Draw!


    I hope you keep your sketchbook going, it looks like you're motivated to draw every day.


    Peace.

    aa.

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    ( You're not ready for human anatomy. )

    plz tell me Why ??

    ( Try drawing from life. Assemble a still life out of simple object that appeal to you. Light them with a sideways light source. Draw! ) ! ! ! ! !

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    another one

    Am a self-taugh person.
    so this is another 3d work.
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    Sorry for my bad english

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    good start. cute 3D charater.

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    I need Help

    I don't know what i do to progress, I have 12 h / day (Free time),
    I Need help.

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    hi there!

    The first page is kind of bad,
    BUT the last three are showing much progress and lots of potential!
    As i might guess you used ref. for those,
    and so you should do most of your time.
    Go catch some anatomy books (Loomis for the beginning)
    and understand the forms of a human body
    Draw the drawings from others and try to remember the shapes, proportion
    and all.
    Start easy and don´t stop your sketch after 10min.
    Pick different topics.
    Life drawings are better than images, but you can learn stuff from both.
    Draw from ref. and try to draw the same without ref. from imagination!
    So you can later on draw more than u ever thought without any help.


    Just some thoughts

    Have fun

    Xaya

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    thank you Xaya.

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    You can practice the human body.......try to learn by drawing the human skeleton in a full frontal view. You need to focus on proportion, that is the key when drawing the human body, or any body for that matter.

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    Thanks -= Grimmjack=-.
    You can see my sketch in this weekend.

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    Update 13-02-06

    Some old Sketch.


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    Last edited by goro_kiss; May 19th, 2006 at 11:39 AM.

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    Update 13-02-06

    2 New Sketch

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    very cool sketches, keep em coming please, I really like your anatomy stuff at the top, the balarena (I know I butchered is my favorite. draw from life and both your imagination, and never stop. please keep posting

    I missed these two last pieces, Very nice, for the first one I would say keep the folds simple when you draw them, and you don't have to draw every fold, try to focus on the larger more apparent folds first then work your way down to the smaller ones. I really like what I'm seeing your improving vastly, keep it up

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    thanks Darktwin
    Ok I Never Stop Posting
    Drawing, Drawing Drawing Drawing evry day

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    Hey, keep it up! You are doing a nice work, the better way to improve is what you are doing, so keep practicing.
    You have already got some good advice from Xaya.
    I agree that you need to work a lot in Human antomy but you seem to be doing that. Also pay more attention to the shadows and try rendering better the images (too much white space).
    Read some good book and study the proportions. use references or at least compare your pieces with references to try and understood what is right or wrong.
    Above all be sef-critic and try to understand what you need to improve.
    I hope youdon't mind my critiques, I a trying to be constructive.
    Cheers
    Fil

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