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    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    The new things are under !

    Hiya everyone, after I decided in september that I would be a concept artist later (I know it's in an odd way), here I finished my first sketchbook. It took me one month to fill it up. Don't be harsh, this is actually the first time that I put efforts in drawing, before that I was sketching all my notes books and my school agenda.

    Some comments would be appreciate. What should I improve, what should I do next. I never took art class and I'm gonna start nude drawing and perspective in a private school next week, for 2 months.

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!


    I'm kinda proud of how I improve. Tristan, Yseult and the Skinny guy of the last page appeal me. I am satisfied, but I still must improve.
    Next time I'll try to post full concept art. These are just sketchlings. I might show my skills on Photoshop soon too, it all depend if I feel shy or not.

    Soliloque
    currently listening : Waltz - Suneohair (Honey & Clover original soundtrack)
    Last edited by Soliloque; March 5th, 2007 at 02:49 PM.
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    Soliloque, congrats on starting a sketchbook here, and also on filling up on the physical sketchbook. It's good to see you filling up your pages, blank space is good space for more! Cool to see you experimenting with faces, one thing though is that they all have similar structures. You should try drawing from references [photographs, magazines, etc.] and also from life. Now get crackin' and fill up the pages! Cheers!

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    Welcome 2 CA Soliloque .. & well just contine ... maye try some detailed drawings of of something ... a "study" of some object .


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    Not really fresh work

    Here's what i've done this winter. Not much, it's my 2th sketchbook. For now i'm working on the 3th and 4th ones. It seems I can't finish a pic, I'm always sketching (what a curse), i'll improve this point this spring. I didn't have the money to attend art classes. Geez, that's me, I'm always saying that'll do something and I don't.. well, shit happens. I'll definitly take some art classes (someday... ).

    Enjoy ! and don't forget to comment =)

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!


    Yes I dream of knights on vaccuum...
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    I need a scanner ! this picture is way too blurry
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    One pic I promise to work on with photoshop.. later..
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    World of Warcraft ! Indeed i'm an addict, mmorpgs made me discover concept art ( Praise to Everquest )
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Fat people are hard to draw at first, gah !
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    2 characters :
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!
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    Comment, Dam#(*% !

    Here's only 3 new pics. I'm currently finishing my college diploma in History, so I don't have many time for drawing. At least I'm improving ( I think )

    I also found a summer job in matte painting, never tried to post my matte, maybe I'll do it one time, anyway, I hope people will comment my new works or else I'll finish depressed, crying under my bed. Please comment, I need attention !

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!
    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque.
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    Hey I like your stuff. You definitallty have your own style. However, don't let that stop you from expanding. For example, your noses are good, but for the most part you draw them all the same. Good for style - bad for learning.

    I'm no expert, but I took a drawing class and basically all they have you do is draw from life. So I would suggest you do that, draw some objects around your house. Draw your friends, draw people from pictures (although not from life technically, it will help give you a broader range of people to draw)

    You're definitally off to a good start. Don't get me wrong. You're better than me!

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    At last, a voice !
    Thanks for the comment, I know, I hate noses (i've seen to much anime, now nose are for me invisible like in those anime faces)

    I'll improve, thanks !
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    i like your works.i think they re so good..
    keep draw
    thanks for comment..

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    i like your works.i think they re so good..
    keep draw
    thanks for comment..

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    good stuff. your hand is quiet solid good. by the way your have the same sketchbook than me ^^.
    keep it up !

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    Don't worry about style now, study your anatomy and figures....get a good grasp of foundations. Style can come later.

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    Get some figure and anatomy studies going. I see alot of proportional issues. Also I would like to see some emulations of the artists that inspire you, I think it would help you get a better sense of the animeish style that oyu seem to be going for.

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    Haha, thx all, I'm having an anime style because they are free on web, and not american comics ! I'll try to find more american style comics near home. I really dig for Marko's style. I want to be less anime, more proprotionnate with time (yea I need anatomy courses, training all alone is kinda hard!).
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    New works !

    Here's a couple of new sketchs

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    And here's a colored one

    Soliloque Sketchbook 04/03 : no critics since Oct. '06, why ?!

    I have a weak comprehension of how to resize an image, I've really tried (change de DPI, and the size) but it always appeared huge on the forums. If someone can help me, I could show more sketchs and doodlings like that,
    Thanks

    Soli

    P.S. Comments are appreciated, as always.
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    The size of your images looks fine on my screen

    I see your enjoying drawing the comic/fantasy type characters.
    As wel all do apperently

    I see a few anatomy studies in your sketchbook, but far to little.
    Those studies are way more important than any of the rendered charcters.
    Try to get your hand at life drawing.
    In the latest updates your lines are very fuzzy aswell.
    Try to loosen your wrist and let it flow.

    Im by far not the best person to give you crits, I'm still learning alot myself.
    The best advice I can give is to just keep on sketching and posting your work.
    The forest fight for sunlight, that takes root in every tree.
    -genesis

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