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    Red face Alien Invasion

    this will be my first post, its a matte paiting of a alien invasion, its the first time that i try it. hope u guys like it. Criticize Please




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    The smoke looks totally dubbed in, which it was, but it shouldn't look like it was.

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    i know that, but its hard to do smoke, and i did it on a couple of minutes, didnt try really hard, thats just a picture i take, and i started to draw on it, and after half an hour i had that. its not great, but its a good beginning i think.

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    ET seems to be angry! Very much action! I like it.
    But I think SaIiL... is definitely right on the smoke. You should make it look less compact (more diffuse). I really like the way you painted the explosion and the car flying away but I don´t understand why the second car (the one in the front) flies away too. It seems to be too far away from the explosion to get hit that strong.
    Btw: Cool topic. I am currently working on something similar (just for fun). So your work is agreat inspiration for me. Thanks!

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    I think you should have more buildings in the background to help support that tower. They don't have to be as tall. He looks so lonely in the middle.

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    It's rather pointless to put stuff up here if you're just gonna do things fast and easy. The results will never be good if you do not spend a lot more time on whatever it is you are working on.

    ps: The laserbeam should be thin in the distance, and grow thicker as it moves towards the foreground of the pic.

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    i do spent time, but thats just one that i did fast to see if i could more or less do something that was on my mind, and i posted it so u guys could see it, i think its not bad, its the first time that im doing smoke, so...
    i understand what your saying but this is just a job to something greater

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    I'll rephrase what I said about doing things quick and easy.
    Scetches and very unfinished concepts are usually done fast and easy. You first put this in "finally finished", and I made a comment to have it moved to Scetches & works in progress, which it was. However, from what I understood, you viewed this pic as a finished thing.
    I hope your next piece will be more thorough. Pics like these can get really interesting

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