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    Second attempt

    hello. this is my second attempt posting artwork. haha, i didnt really know how to the first time. but anyway, im a young artist, 15, and definately need constructive critisism as you call it. so . . . heres some stuff . . .
    demigod
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    real triplets
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    double things
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    hmmm, these are alot smaller than i thought they would be. say something if they're too small to critique.
    Last edited by Mr.Adam; January 20th, 2006 at 07:43 PM.
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    hi Mr.Adam,

    personally i don´t like to click on thumbnails,
    so just post your work directly with max. res. 800x600
    (640x480 is a good one)

    so to give you something to eat;
    you work very clean and you spend enough time to your sketches, which is great,
    nevertheless there is no real third dimension feelable.
    Also check out loomis for anatomy basics,
    there is no way around to improve your skills.

    So have fun and go on.

    See you

    Xaya
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    hey whats up, thanks for the crits. i see what u mean when you speak about the missing third dimension. this definately isnt all my art, just some of my favorites. but i think your right anyway. yea i totally want to take an anatomy class or something. i'll look into loomis, i ve already got an anatomy book. i just need to practise. i wish my art class at school was more constructive, i hate these dumbass paper mache creations and friggin clay ashtry projects. anyway, ill post again soon. thanks
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