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    This is Rita, an original character of mine for the role-playing system Changeling: the Dreaming.

    Last edited by Hyacinth; January 15th, 2006 at 03:58 PM.
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    ... or not. I'm having trouble getting the picture to come up on screen.

    EDIT: Got it fixed.

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    To post a image up use the tag [img]hosted site[/img]. Only thing that brothering me about this img is the collar bone, but everthing else looks fine.


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    LOVE that face, such a subtle dose of cocky/confident.

    Good stuff, hope to see more.

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    I agree, good expression on that face. the eye placement is a bit off, tho, grab her right eye in photoshop and move it to our right to bring it in line with the other features. Also, hit the top of her head with some of that red (unless its supposed to be dyed black on top).

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    oof...
    its ok.
    we LOVE harsh welcomes here.

    its good that you used reference,
    though try not to use such recognizable reference next time.

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    hmm, my only crit would be the lines under the collar bones. you can lose those, they make the bone look too defined

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    Ouch Yutani.

    I knew it was Jolie from the beginning.

    From what I see, her left hands pinky is a little swollen, and it seems the red strands of hair don't fit, try to push it back so it doesn't... overflow.

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    I didnt' know it was Angie. I think it's different enough that you don't necessarily think of her. Lots of folks do that pose. I like the glowy red hair but the total lack of definition in the hair close to her head bugs me a little. I can't tell if she has a headband on or what - like, why it gets so dense there. I think it could use a little more obvious definition on the top of her head.

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